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She Crawls Out

She crawls out of her skin, folding it on bath water Noticing the ring of a former lover, With cleanser she scrubs his territorial insignia, With Clorox, bleaches white again, the tubs virginity Glances at re-hung gambling hand towels, dirty mans hand print Flung from the bar they go, Rapid walking to the wash, Powder and sand and water flow, swish, swish, swish, to and fro Up and down jollies on a ringer swill, Timing the buzzer, she pulls, Wet load to the line for solar solitaire, Fling, fling upon the skinny wire, Pin, pin the wooden men, Inside she scurry’s before the doorbell rings, Glancing about the room for her under things, Stuffing them in cushion’s, out of sight of men Evidence secured, a virgin’s plight, again, and again, she'd pretend ______________________________ Inspired by: Michele Nold-Godleske e e cummings contest

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Date: 5/19/2009 2:18:00 PM
symtoms. a list of symtoms but they are oh so normal to some one at this very moment. to that .0012 percent that notice that this errily resembles what they do. this is the poetry we seek. John H Loving III
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Date: 5/19/2009 9:12:00 AM
Brillant write Sandra, very creative, love it. And many thanx for all your comments, always apperciated. Take care.:)
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Date: 5/19/2009 8:04:00 AM
Another big WOW from me. Can you tell I'm a fan? Alexandra, your poetry rocks. Good luck, not needed, but wishing it anyway. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/19/2009 7:29:00 AM
Oh Sandra! This is a great write with such a message. Pin,pin the wooden men, I can see them along the clothes line... with their fake cigars perhaps also. ;) blessing to you my friend.
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Date: 5/19/2009 7:21:00 AM
Nice.
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Date: 5/19/2009 6:28:00 AM
Another excellent entry....Sandra, your writing is amazing!! ~ Best wishes in the contest!!~ Carrie
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Date: 5/19/2009 4:17:00 AM
very creative, original write! Sandra! Jim
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Date: 5/18/2009 9:02:00 PM
Speachless...What can I say to this? I love it! Nate
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