She Crawls Out

She crawls out of her skin, folding it on bath water
                                           Noticing the ring of a former lover,
With cleanser she scrubs his territorial insignia,
                                           With Clorox, bleaches white again, the tubs virginity
Glances at re-hung gambling hand towels, dirty mans hand print
                                           Flung from the bar they go,
Rapid walking to the wash,
                                           Powder and sand and water flow, swish, swish, swish, to and fro
Up and down jollies on a ringer swill,
                                           Timing the buzzer, she pulls,
Wet load to the line for solar solitaire,
                                            Fling, fling upon the skinny wire,
Pin, pin the wooden men,
                                            Inside she scurry’s before the doorbell rings,
Glancing about the room for her under things,
                                            Stuffing them in cushion’s, out of sight of men
Evidence secured, a virgin’s plight, again, and again, she'd pretend 

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Inspired by: Michele Nold-Godleske 
e e cummings contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Loving Iii Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 2:18 PM
symtoms. a list of symtoms but they are oh so normal to some one at this very moment. to that .0012 percent that notice that this errily resembles what they do. this is the poetry we seek. John H Loving III
Baez Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 9:12 AM
Brillant write Sandra, very creative, love it. And many thanx for all your comments, always apperciated. Take care.:)
Winter Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 8:04 AM
Another big WOW from me. Can you tell I'm a fan? Alexandra, your poetry rocks. Good luck, not needed, but wishing it anyway. Love, Shar
Gumbo Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 7:29 AM
Oh Sandra! This is a great write with such a message. Pin,pin the wooden men, I can see them along the clothes line... with their fake cigars perhaps also. ;) blessing to you my friend.
Shahwan Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 7:21 AM
Nice.
Richards Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 6:28 AM
Another excellent entry....Sandra, your writing is amazing!! ~ Best wishes in the contest!!~ Carrie
Goff Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 4:17 AM
very creative, original write! Sandra! Jim
Leccese Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 9:02 PM
Speachless...What can I say to this? I love it! Nate
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