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She Craved

She Craved For the beast. Amidst his lair In candle surround, Ripped white linen clings As their sweated bodies writhe. In unification, his seed Shall spawn the beginning of the dark. Whilst his translucent shadows walk earths light. .

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/10/2014 9:51:00 AM

If it is for the contest, she needs double reverse Etheree, James

James Fraser
Date: 9/13/2014 12:36:00 PM

Dr. Ram, it's not for the contest, but I may indeed scribe for said contest, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 9/9/2014 9:25:00 PM

Mmmn teaching me two words from your poem..:) descriptive write..:)

James Fraser
Date: 9/13/2014 12:14:00 PM

Thank you Olive, it's always a joy if someone learns from someone else, your writing buddy, James :) x

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/9/2014 4:09:00 PM

WOW!!!! This is brilliant a seven and added to my fav list. You are an amazing writer James a real inspiration.

James Fraser
Date: 9/13/2014 11:56:00 AM

Another of my Dark writes Maurice. Between them and fantasy, it's white i like to write. Many thanks once again, I'm beaming from ear to ear, James :)