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For the Fantasy Contest of Chetta Achara

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While strolling in the woods one hot day, she felt tired, but then she saw a willow tree. She lay down underneath it in its shade while listening to whispers its leaves made. She dozed off dreaming that the tree caressed her body with its limbs, and she felt blessed. Was it a dream? She knew the willow’s soul, and being one with it became her goal. She woke to find her arms were branches, and her legs were dark like bark. Ah, she felt grand! She’d melded with the tree, and yet she still could move about. She had not lost her will. As if by instinct, she could comprehend that she was linked now to her newfound friend. Though joined to the tree, still she had control to leave her friend. She had a brand new role. She was the wood’s protector, yet she could roam a beautiful, free nymph in her woodland home. But in the night, she’d cling to her tree’s bark, dissolving into willow in the dark.

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Date: 2/24/2024 11:26:00 PM
Leaf it out..' You really have gone way along the Limb..So to say? But the pictures not grim, btw Just regard this as a quick trunk call.' To check On your errant ways..Oh my daze.' As a matter Of fact return now.! If the tree is cut down you Could end up going down on paper, as a victim Of pulp fiction;? rather than the narrator.?
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Date: 2/24/2024 1:18:00 AM
At the age of 16 and my introduction to "psychedelic" compounds ( "Tripping" on L.S.D. ), my fellow "Freak" compatriots and I, spent our evenings in a very large, "New York" park (198 acres ) ___[ Https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Clove_Lakes_Park ]___ where I experienced a spiritual affinity with the other natural creatures, especially the trees. God's creation "kickin' adzs" and I'm not so bad myself! Inspired ~ Breathe life.
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Date: 2/23/2024 7:26:00 AM
Such an enchanting fantasy poem dear Andrea. ‘ she knew the willow’s soul’ ‘ a beautiful, free nymph’. Love the idea of a protector of the woods. Human soul merging itself into nature and becoming one. I especially loved the last two lines and the imagery it created. Good luck in the contest. I really enjoyed merging into the woods too. Hugs for a wonderful weekend xx
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Date: 2/22/2024 2:38:00 PM
Ahhh!!! Good one. Must be for a contest, if so, reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara K
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Date: 2/22/2024 2:03:00 PM
The wood's protector, its a delightful story Andrea, and beautifully told. Just the type of dream that anyone would like to have, Loved it.
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Date: 2/22/2024 10:12:00 AM
Great fantastic fancy poem. I don't believe in fairies but I used them in poetry. They have a je ne sais qua sort of appeal in such fantasies.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/22/2024 1:45:00 PM
thanks, Victor. I have better ones than this on wood nymphs but it had to be new poem.
Date: 2/22/2024 9:03:00 AM
WOW!!! "She" is a creative/fun write/story. Love It... "Good Luck" Have a fun/blessed day writing away..........
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/22/2024 1:45:00 PM
thanks, Paula
Date: 2/22/2024 7:36:00 AM
sweet how you used such the touchy feely tree to meld with...now whut do ya do when the handsome wodewose happens past yourn arms, i mean branches one crispy stary night ,) much love
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/22/2024 1:46:00 PM
wonder what a wodewose could be!
Date: 2/22/2024 6:10:00 AM
Feeling one with nature is profound. I hope this poem will inspire people to assume the role of protector as did your protagonist. Nature really needs our help. That you came up with this speaks volumes to your understanding. Thank-you for letting everyone else know!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/22/2024 1:46:00 PM
thanks for your thoughtful comment, Duke.
Date: 2/22/2024 12:49:00 AM
AD, your love for the woods and wanting to be a protector is so touching. The rhymes too matched your fantasy. Keep writing and best wishes.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/22/2024 1:46:00 PM
thank you, sir.
Date: 2/21/2024 4:13:00 PM
as a lover of trees, I was drawn to your fantasy of the wood nymph. Loved 'she knew the willow's soul and being one would become her goal. Have you ever read the book, THE SECRET LIVES OF TREES? It's a bit out on the edge but through story tells about the communal nature of trees and what we humans can learn from them...been years since I read it. Anyway, best wishes with the contest. I'm sure you'll do well with this poem, hugs, Sara
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/22/2024 1:45:00 PM
no, I have not read it, but I sure do enjoy my trees.
Date: 2/21/2024 3:10:00 PM
Love tree, and I loved this! What an interesting take on it...:)
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