Notes About The Poem

For the Fantasy Contest of Chetta Achara

__________________________________________________________________________-

She

While strolling in the woods one hot day, she
felt tired, but then she saw a willow tree.
She lay down underneath it in its shade
while listening to whispers its leaves made.

She dozed off dreaming that the tree caressed
her body with its limbs, and she felt blessed.
Was it a dream? She knew the willow’s soul,
and being one with it became her goal.

She woke to find her arms were branches, and
her legs were dark like bark. Ah, she felt grand!
She’d melded with the tree, and yet she still
could move about. She had not lost her will.

As if by instinct, she could comprehend
that she was linked now to her newfound friend.
Though joined to the tree, still she had control
to leave her friend. She had a brand new role.

She was the wood’s protector, yet she could roam
a beautiful, free nymph in her woodland home.
But in the night, she’d cling to her tree’s bark,
dissolving into willow in the dark.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Maverick Avatar
February 24, 2024 at 11:26 PM
Leaf it out..' You really have gone way along the Limb..So to say? But the pictures not grim, btw Just regard this as a quick trunk call.' To check On your errant ways..Oh my daze.' As a matter Of fact return now.! If the tree is cut down you Could end up going down on paper, as a victim Of pulp fiction;? rather than the narrator.?
Warlov Avatar
February 24, 2024 at 1:18 AM
At the age of 16 and my introduction to "psychedelic" compounds ( "Tripping" on L.S.D. ), my fellow "Freak" compatriots and I, spent our evenings in a very large, "New York" park (198 acres ) ___[ Https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Clove_Lakes_Park ]___ where I experienced a spiritual affinity with the other natural creatures, especially the trees. God's creation "kickin' adzs" and I'm not so bad myself! Inspired ~ Breathe life.
Bowring Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 7:26 AM
Such an enchanting fantasy poem dear Andrea. ‘ she knew the willow’s soul’ ‘ a beautiful, free nymph’. Love the idea of a protector of the woods. Human soul merging itself into nature and becoming one. I especially loved the last two lines and the imagery it created. Good luck in the contest. I really enjoyed merging into the woods too. Hugs for a wonderful weekend xx
Kendrick Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 2:38 PM
Ahhh!!! Good one. Must be for a contest, if so, reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara K
Volumes Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 2:03 PM
The wood's protector, its a delightful story Andrea, and beautifully told. Just the type of dream that anyone would like to have, Loved it.
Buhagiar Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 10:12 AM
Great fantastic fancy poem. I don't believe in fairies but I used them in poetry. They have a je ne sais qua sort of appeal in such fantasies.
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 1:45 PM
thanks, Victor. I have better ones than this on wood nymphs but it had to be new poem.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 9:03 AM
WOW!!! "She" is a creative/fun write/story. Love It... "Good Luck" Have a fun/blessed day writing away..........
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 1:45 PM
thanks, Paula
Peranteau Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 7:36 AM
sweet how you used such the touchy feely tree to meld with...now whut do ya do when the handsome wodewose happens past yourn arms, i mean branches one crispy stary night ,) much love
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 1:46 PM
wonder what a wodewose could be!
Beaufort Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 6:10 AM
Feeling one with nature is profound. I hope this poem will inspire people to assume the role of protector as did your protagonist. Nature really needs our help. That you came up with this speaks volumes to your understanding. Thank-you for letting everyone else know!
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 1:46 PM
thanks for your thoughtful comment, Duke.
Farookh Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 12:49 AM
AD, your love for the woods and wanting to be a protector is so touching. The rhymes too matched your fantasy. Keep writing and best wishes.
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 1:46 PM
thank you, sir.
Hind Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 3:10 PM
Love tree, and I loved this! What an interesting take on it...:)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace