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'...stick with me baby, I'm the guy that you came in with.' Luck Be A Lady Tonight - Frank Sinatra The way she twists her hair and places back that wayward wisp behind her ear, the way she checks her face in every mirror. How she shimmers to the ladies' room to re-apply her lipstick, or she lingers irresistibly as you politely hold the door ajar. The way she glides so smoothly; you're speechless as she commandeers the room; 'neath her spell you're both the best man and the fool.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/9/2012 7:40:00 AM
Just had to read your first posting; you had what it took even back then! You present ladies as though you know them too well :)
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Date: 4/9/2009 5:56:00 PM
Dear Keith, I hope my interpretation of the last line is wrong We don't know what we have til its gone Superb Write ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 4/9/2009 10:35:00 AM
In the end you put our faces to a mirror, and we love it still.
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Date: 4/9/2009 8:03:00 AM
SUPER! You're so good at presenting romantic situations, nothing too long or too short, nothing the least bit corny.....She's a regular ballerina by description. Love, daver
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