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Shattering Symbols

Shattering Symbols Sometimes I feel shattered between symbols, A musician crashes me side to side, I plan quiet and peaceful meditation, Then life takes me for an unscheduled ride. The world comes down with its pressing problems, The symbols clang and squeeze my aching head; Musicians’ drums beating, so demanding; Oh, for soft pianissimo instead. The breeze and wind songs of flute and oboe, Hover the symbols’ overbearing blare; With sweetness overwhelm the symbols’ thrust, Then sweet life’s harmony returns its flair. Everywhere Walt Disney birds are tweeting, A musical garden perfumes the air.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/29/2017 6:40:00 PM
Lovely!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 1/30/2017 10:10:00 AM
Thank you for reading my poems. I'm truly flattered!
Date: 1/28/2017 8:54:00 PM
Lovely!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 1/29/2017 9:56:00 AM
How can I thank you for commenting on three of my poems! I appreciate you, Mike Hauser. And i do love your writing and your sense of humor.
Date: 1/26/2017 8:09:00 AM
Great metophor.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 1/27/2017 11:28:00 AM
Thanks for dropping in - wish I could offer you a cup of tea.
Date: 1/24/2017 7:05:00 PM
Nice use of homonyms and metaphors in this work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 1/27/2017 11:26:00 AM
Sorry I'm so long acknowledging your kind comment. Thank you.
Date: 1/24/2017 6:06:00 PM
Lovely sonnet Sunlite I especially like the final couplet with the Disney birds I think it is quite charming:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 1/27/2017 11:26:00 AM
It looks like I didn't thank you, so do so now. I really value your comment.
Date: 1/23/2017 5:14:00 PM
A lovely and unique sonnet!! :)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 1/24/2017 11:11:00 AM
I think music is everywhere - thank you so very much!
Date: 1/23/2017 11:29:00 AM
"A musical garden perfumes the air." I love that line and what beautiful choice to close out the melodic poem. Nicely done my friend.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 1/24/2017 11:09:00 AM
I love it when a commenter likes a line. Thank you.

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