Sharp Tongue

tripping on my tongue daggers flying out my mouth cutting your psyche

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/23/2018 2:40:00 PM

This is deep, my friend - a great senryu with a potent message! Well done! Hugs. Pandita

Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/23/2018 3:47:00 PM

thank you!

Wendy Nipas

Date: 7/9/2018 7:49:00 AM

Love it! I can clearly see the picture. smart use of words.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/9/2018 10:29:00 AM

thank you

Lyric Man

Date: 7/6/2018 1:22:00 AM

Hi Tania.. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your well crafted write this evening. I always appreciate the giftings of a pen in the hand of a poet!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/6/2018 4:43:00 AM

thank you and thanks for stopping by, I appreciate your encouraging words!