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Sharon-Lee

You thought you lost everything Had nothing to live for But I still saw you As you were Just not as happy You talked about Everything you couldn’t do Disregarding all you still could You lost your balance Your outlook warped I thought with time It would mend I couldn’t see There would never be enough time To heal your shattered spirit Till you eventually let yourself Die of a broken heart AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted for contest DEPRESSION AND SADNESS sponsored by CRAIG HAWKINS - November 8, 2017 - RANKED "HONORABLE MENTION"

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Date: 11/21/2017 3:58:00 AM
Line, a sad write.
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Date: 11/21/2017 11:47:00 AM
Yes indeed, thank you so much for your visit, James.
Date: 11/14/2017 12:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Date: 11/14/2017 7:54:00 PM
Thanks for your visit, Frances.

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