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Sharks In the Soup-Soupers Beware

Soupers beware! This place is dangerous. There is a shark on loose. But he is a coward. He goes around pretending be a friendly fish. Don't turn your back or go into deep waters of the soup unless you are prepared. You must beat him at his own game. So that “ his “little” fish costume will start to crumble, and you will see him for the shark he is. Stand in your own truth and “ bite” him with your amazing poetry flow.There is no rhymes like yours. Your “bite” will send him packing. Now that you have been warned go into deep my friend.I am convinced you will be ok. Inspired by the Shark In The Water contest. 12-18-18

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/19/2018 5:25:00 AM

There are plenty of sharks about even on here, they always get their comeuppance's, look at jaws. Hope you have a lovely Christmas. Tom.

Sand Blown

Date: 12/19/2018 4:19:00 AM

when starting to write my head is soup ...my mind cries shhhh hark, there-in self doubt swims round and round the rim of the gravitas well

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/18/2018 6:06:00 PM

Hey, I took 'shark' in a complete different direction - a shark that devours time preventing us from reading/writing all we want. I SO ENJOYED your visit, was most good to see you and visiting you via your comments. Thank you. I think your effective write is what might be desired and you laid it out with optimism and encouragement - that's excellent. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/18/2018 5:10:00 PM

Great one Alexis! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 12/18/2018 4:14:00 PM

I'm writing on a similar theme Alexis, I still see such nastiness going on even today and there is no need for it and the person involved should be ashamed of their actions:-( hugs jan xx

Bobby May

Date: 12/18/2018 3:33:00 PM

This was a whale of a tail Alexis a wonderful poem my friend, I am sure this was about Chris and not me. lol

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/18/2018 3:38:00 PM

Lol! Bobby, Shhh.... You wasn't supposed to say anything. I'm enjoying your sense humour. Thanks for commenting on my "Shark" of a poem:-) Alexis

Chris Green

Date: 12/18/2018 3:24:00 PM

You gotta watch out for those pesky sharks. :) Nice one Alexis.

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/18/2018 3:27:00 PM

Hi Chris, Tell me about it . Those sharks sure are pesky. I appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis