Francine Roberts Poet Tail-rhyme

Sharing the Sunset

The deer find shade beneath the tree

enjoying an evening with me.

They are not afraid.

I, on deck and they on ground,

watch the sunset, without a sound.

Memories are made.




by Francine Roberts
entered in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tail-rhyme" contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown August 8, 2011 at 4:33 PM Congratulations on your placement in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tail-Rhyme" contest Francine. Love, Carol

Jack Horne August 7, 2011 at 11:02 AM Quick congrats before I get logged out again!

Nette Onclaud August 7, 2011 at 6:41 AM grancine..a joy to read with matching congrats on your glowing win! :) huggs Nette Onclaud August 7, 2011 at 6:42 AM *francine*

Kash Poet August 7, 2011 at 12:54 AM Wonderful poem Francine....Congrats on your win.

Jun-Jun Villanueva August 6, 2011 at 9:31 AM CONGRATULATIONS~~~~~a well deserved 6th place win~~~~~smile~~~~~*_*junjun

Cyndi Macmillan August 5, 2011 at 9:25 PM Truly a special one, Francine. My yard had bunnies, lots and lots of bunnies. Still, I enjoyed them, and those memories, like yours, make ME smile. Though my garden... ummm...not so much. ;-)

Andrea Dietrich August 5, 2011 at 9:10 PM ahhh, it's those lovely deer again, and congrats on your fine win!

Joyce Johnson August 5, 2011 at 8:59 PM What a peaceful picture. congratulations on your top ten. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 5, 2011 at 6:58 PM Congrats Francine on your exciting win with this lovely Tail rhyme .. expressive and imaginative ! and it only took me ten minutes to post this congrats to u ..haha..

Don Johnson August 5, 2011 at 6:41 PM So thats how you do it lady sweet, lovely n petite, who stops my heart, a beat, intentionally?

Dr.Ram Mehta August 5, 2011 at 5:11 PM Congratulations on the win in my contest, Francine

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 4, 2011 at 10:28 PM such a pretty poem Francine.. much success in the contest .. a vivid beauty here ...

Cory Long August 4, 2011 at 2:19 PM i love sunsets and nature this was such a beautiful write.. nicely done cory

Black Eyed Susan August 2, 2011 at 12:21 PM sounds wonderful - peaceful and beautiful. good luck in the contest :)

Constance La France August 1, 2011 at 9:30 PM This is so beautiful, Francine, so visual, I really think it is a winner, and thanks for your ever wonderful comments on my poetry, I so love that~~

Barbara Gorelick August 1, 2011 at 7:07 PM What a great picture this makes..can I sit on your deck with you ..? I love this form..I know this will do well...BG

Joyce Johnson August 1, 2011 at 2:16 PM Yours is very nice also Francine. I wonder how easy it is going to be to judge these. Thanks for noticing my error. It is fixed. Love, Joyce