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Sharing My List

Shared my list with God today the pros and cons of the season: how fond I am of blossoms, despite all the sneezing – how showers cleanse the air, refreshment of a spring drenching; how orchids abundance bear, how perfect nights are for strolling, loving couples hands assuring – puckering in leafy shadows, beneath endearing folds of canopies, stars all a-blush, beaming deeply brighter from such intimate exchange – Shared my list with God today – more pros than cons; not grading His Season, nor His Methods nor Reason...just wanting to say about this one, of Rebirth and tasteful Sharing, I find no other, delightful enough for affectionate comparing....

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/11/2023 4:26:00 AM

Enjoyable from beginning to end. A fine poem Joe

Joe Dimino
Date: 4/11/2023 7:10:00 AM

Hi Wen; thank you. No profound message, just simple and sweet. I am a warrior on the outside, but a marshmallow at the core. Blessings my friend.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/10/2023 11:35:00 AM

Beautifully expressed throughout. I especially love the final verse. Best of wishes. :)

Joe Dimino
Date: 4/10/2023 7:29:00 PM

Thank you, Evelyn; have a wonderful evening. Blessings my friend!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/10/2023 6:00:00 AM

“… puckering in leafy shadows… stars all a-blush, beaming deeply brighter from such intimate exchange” - such wonderfulthoughts and imagery, Joe! I love it!

Joe Dimino
Date: 4/10/2023 7:33:00 AM

Thank you so much, Kim; your encouragement means a lot to me. Blessings.

Valsa George

Date: 4/10/2023 4:46:00 AM

I too am captivated by the beauty of the line, Smile has highlighted. Thus you have submitted your list of beautiful gifts you wish to have from God and are waiting to see them sanctioned ! Beautiful poem dear Joe.

Joe Dimino
Date: 4/10/2023 5:09:00 AM

Hi Valsa; thank you so much. So pleased you enjoyed this work. Great fun to write as you know. Blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/10/2023 3:16:00 AM

- What a beautiful poem, Joe - "beneath endearing folds of canopies, stars all a-blush" ... - hugs

Joe Dimino
Date: 4/10/2023 3:58:00 AM

Thank you, Sunshine; hope you had a Marvelous Easter. Blessings my friend!