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Shaping the Night

If I could shape the night
it would be round
and hollowed out to hold
dreams drifting formless
before being born in sleep.
I would hang the walls 
with shiny mirrors to reflect
each star moving overhead 
and have a pond
on which the moon could
shed its light.

If I could shape the night
I would have curtains 
of gossamer thread to catch
each passing sound
and make music of noise,
hoist sails that fill 
on the slightest breeze 
to give breath to a poem 
and turn the dark
into song.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 9/24/2023 8:17:00 AM
If we "could shape the night to give breath to a poem and turn the dark into a song," I think I'd put sunrise on hold each morning. Imagine the verses we would birth to write them as wistfully as you penned this one, Paul.
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/25/2023 5:12:00 AM
Too kind Lin.....your comments are always valued and encouraging.... moreover, thoughtful. Do look forward to them...thanks. Paul

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