Shape Up

Life's circle- no beginning and with no end, spins us each day, revolving- brings sadness and joy

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Heidie Buys

Date: 8/30/2008 4:38:00 PM

Great wisdome and insight. Good one. Regards Heidie

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/28/2008 4:14:00 PM

There is great truth here no matter what. I was actually thinking about this little write for a long time and almost wrote what I thought could be an exception. I decided I was wrong. I think. : ) Yes, the cycle of life. Well written, of course. Love, Shar

P Sheart

Date: 8/27/2008 6:31:00 AM

Hi Brian The perfect circle! A stunning visual that leaves a last impression on ones heart. Just beautiful dear Brian. Many Blessings to you and yours. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

Sean Kelly

Date: 8/27/2008 6:19:00 AM

Yes , Brian , you've summed it all up here.... So I'll just ship out.....

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 8/27/2008 4:48:00 AM

Brian, love the thought and message in this piece. It comes through clearly with the terrific flow and provided imagery. If I may suggest in order to get the Lanterne count, line 3, "No beginning" might be better as "with no start" just to get the 3 count, but otherwise this is still an excellent write. Michael

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 8/27/2008 3:42:00 AM

Yes it does...it brings the perfect whole...well said, Brian. :) Love and blessings, Kristin