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Shape of Mind : Watery

SHAPE OF MIND : WATERY Water existing in three natural forms shows three different shapes, as liquid to fit in shape of container. When water freezes, comes in solid state: Ice, glacier, iceberg, snow, hails appear in varied configuration. Water turning vapor escapes in limitless contour. Mind resembling water exhibits three patterns. Being affirmative, assertive, gallant, aggressive, envious or revengeful mind solidifies in stern attitude. Rigid mind in solid texture showing dynamism, acts harsh if needed. When compassionate, kind, jovial or rippling in love, mind melts drifting in dreamy stream of emotion. accommodating and welcoming like liquid water flow Transcending to sensual spiritual mode mind entwines with soul soaring high in ecstatic vapour of ethereal glow. Wonderful water initiating Life. Marvelous mind controlling life- long journey. Both run in same three styles flashing human profile. If not polluted, stands sterile. 06/24/ 21 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 26 Contest by Mark Toney

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Date: 12/31/2022 7:38:00 AM
A spiritual write Anisha, and an apt comparison. Very nice! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 7/2/2021 6:06:00 PM
beautifully spiritual Anisha, congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/2/2021 1:41:00 PM
Transcending to sensual spiritual mode... very nice, Anisha. Congratulations on your fine win!!
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Date: 7/2/2021 7:53:00 AM
Watery mind. Deep Thoughts. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/27/2021 9:01:00 PM
There's wonderful depth and truths to this pen; beautifull executed.
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Date: 6/24/2021 10:32:00 AM
Awesome comparison of mind and water. All the best for contest.
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