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Shame On You

Don’t listen to the whisper. Don’t encourage the lying Siren: That your brain is a trash island, refuse washed and scattered upon the shore. Your mind a broken cobweb dangling, swaying in autumn’s desolate breath, catching dead leaves, detritus, and various bugs. That your heart is crumbling walls, eroded; dilapidated and weathered like an old barn on a forgotten patch of land. That your thoughts are dried worms stuck on a summer sidewalk, and there’re knives somewhere behind your eyeballs. That your tongue is a cinderblock atop a dead and rotting squirrel. That needles line your throat and birds fall from your sky. That you’re a flower with no petals and no pollen, refusing to die, in a state of perpetual wilt. That you’re a cracked mirror, a stained rug, a stolen heirloom; an amputee dog. This is shame’s whisper; don’t’ listen lest you start to believe and become dead snakeskin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/19/2017 9:12:00 PM
I do like to give constructive criticisms. I am not an expert, you can ignore what I say next as I do like your poem. If I were you, I'd stop at heirloom. Delete everything else below except keep and end with the line, "this is shame's whisper; don't listen". If you don't like this suggestion, just delete this post and no one will ever know otherwise. The imagery above heirloom is bold and vibrant. Sometimes leaving a poem open ended is the best way to end.
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Date: 9/19/2017 9:02:00 PM
Joey, I like this. I'm an avid outdoorsman.Thoughts are dried worms stuck on a summer sidewalk...tongue is a cinder block stop a dead and rotting squirrel. This Is Shame.
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