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In a moment, she was out the back door, And turned green cat eyes on me; Rare vase lay broken on the floor, And guests just arriving to tea. Her ears lay flat upon her head, As she humbly crouched along, Little cakes and tarts of cherry red, And soon would hear birds' evensong. The antique vase lay creamy white, And covered in vines green and gold, And tiny, beauteous birds in flight; Three hundred years old. Abby lingered in stillness of afternoon, And once more the doorbell rang. It appears they'd arrived too soon; Fragrant pies of lemon meringue. Trampled violets and roses from the garden wane, They lay there so wet and so lovely; And bloom for now and never come again, Though tea is served at three. Abigail sat darkly upon the porch rail, The guilt in her eyes apparent, And swatted a bee with her tail, And garden smells were prevalent.

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Date: 12/19/2019 4:29:00 AM
Another beautiful write. I love black cats with green eyes, very good luck, even if they break plates with 300 year old birds lying on the floor. I love the swatting of the Bee. lol. This poem is delicate like fine bone china and appliqued best linen brought out for special occasions. Leanne x
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/19/2019 11:46:00 AM
How nice! Thank you so much for that lovely comment, Leanne. :)
Date: 12/18/2019 7:07:00 AM
Exquisite imagery in your poem Evelyn--a real life portrait you painted in these exquisite words.
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Date: 12/18/2019 12:48:00 PM
So glad you liked the imagery, Vijay. I am happy that a portrait was created for you. Thank you very much!
Date: 12/17/2019 10:27:00 PM
Interesting poem Evelyn. Loved the cat being illustrated. a nice one for your collection of timeless pieces
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/18/2019 12:45:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely comment, Greg, and for calling my pieces timeless. :)
Date: 12/17/2019 9:06:00 PM
Neat narrative, Evelyn. The cat, Abby, was surely feeling it! --- even though you were the one who had to deal wth it! ~ Better days are ahead, surely. ~ gw
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/18/2019 12:55:00 PM
Thank you for your delightful comment, Gershon. That scamp! Obviously, I still love her, though. :)

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