Shalom Is At the Basis of the Universe
MY FIRST DIMINISHED HEXAVERSE (with apologies for fumbling)
I
Unless underlying
Peace is our bedrock
Surface war delude
As beneath strong waves
Oceans are at peace
II
Shalom, siblings
Good Creation
Designer God
IS and named: Peace
III
Recall nuns
Cloisters call
Of Peace, Ohh
IV
They know something TRUE
We sometimes do too
V
F L O W
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NOTE: In Line #3, I ought to have written "Surface wars delude," or "Surface war deludes." Would it have affected the syllable count? I was unsure ...
Copyright © Anil Deo | Year Posted 2020
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