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Sunbeams interact with dreams at the shallow end of sleep. And reality awakes; if it isn't buried too deep. Drowsily reaching over, you half expect he'll be there. But his pillow's all you find, where his scent clings to the air. His death brought grief to your door, but your tears have mostly dried. For it wasn't that long ago that you laid in bed and cried. You struggle with depression; willing yourself to get up. And clinging to normalcy; you drink from a half-full cup. You cage your raging anger; whenever it barks and nips. And peruse faded photos that bring a smile to your lips. Faith enters your grieving heart, where hope slowly starts to grow. And although it's gradual, its effect begins to show.

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Date: 3/13/2018 2:58:00 PM
Wonderful poem about the understandably long recovery after a death. Well done, Emile.
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Date: 9/8/2015 10:26:00 AM
Enjoyed... SKAT
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/8/2015 6:12:00 PM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 9/7/2015 3:13:00 PM
this evokes angst and yet your artwords make this piece so splendid, emile.. huggs
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Date: 9/8/2015 8:34:00 AM
Thanks so much Nette, your friendly comments are much appreciated. Emile.
Date: 9/7/2015 3:02:00 PM
Dear Emile, so sad........made me sad....last lines throw light on hope....consoles the reader...nice...love, Anu:-)
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Date: 9/8/2015 8:33:00 AM
Thanks Anulaxmi, sadness is a part of life, your comments are always appreciated. Emile.
Date: 9/7/2015 2:59:00 PM
I can only imagine the pain of that loved one not being there Emile - I know mum misses dad terribly:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/8/2015 8:32:00 AM
Thanks Jan, your comments are always most appreciated. Emile.

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