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Shall We Dance?

Danced I with thee in the moonlight but a silhouette on the wall. Danced I with thee in the candle light beneath the sheerest shawl. Danced I with thee by the rivers side by the meadows hem enthralled Danced I with thee at eternity’s edge as the constellations sprawl. On we writhe since the Word formed she shaped for he side by side, as our actions bore a universal core immutable as the tide.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/11/2010 3:52:00 AM
Beautiful imagination and expression of your love, joys and pleasures in this excellently written Poem. Thanks. I have placed some new poems Hope you would enjoy them. Best wishes and love...xxx Ravindra..xxx Deborah Guzi
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Date: 3/9/2010 5:24:00 PM
Ok Miss Deborah~ You must know your unblocked and yes I loved your entry in my contest it was very good, Now as for this poem absolutely wonderful! Each line moved me and flowed wonderfully! Laura :)
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Date: 3/8/2010 6:41:00 PM
Whew!..I am growing envious of that 'sillhouette on the wall', Deb!...What a beauty THIS one is!...Also, so very glad you 'got' my recent tetractyls poem!...I even went so far as to re-edit and change the title to make it a little more obvious?? - Tim
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Date: 3/8/2010 12:07:00 PM
Beautiful poem my sweet friend..C harma
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Date: 3/6/2010 9:26:00 PM
Beautiful poem...Enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 3/6/2010 8:11:00 PM
This has lovely rhythm, imagery and rhyme, Deb! Love the last line. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/6/2010 7:37:00 PM
If we put our two poems together tonight ..WOW ... love explosion... a beautiful romance here in your lines Debbie.. thankxxx for enjoying MentalMania also.. my "honey poo" is in Canada this week on business so ..while the cat is away yada yada"... in NYC for a little ME time.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/6/2010 6:52:00 PM
A beautiful verse Deborah. I am fond of repetition in a poem and this reads so well, it was a pleasure. good work...Cheers Margaret
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Date: 3/6/2010 6:04:00 PM
Excellent work here Deb. It shows intellect and thought! Keep it up! RAY
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