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 ~ Oh ... how you touch me ...


                    Your nails find flesh, burning deep


                                        Pray, do not ... stop ... now ~ 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 7:30 PM
a passionate one. That would be a real bummer if they stopped!!!
Barden Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 11:28 PM
Indeed! Thank you, Andrea ... this was a bit "edgy", lol. :-)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 7:52 AM
Giggles, um and *blush* ;) <3
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January 17, 2018 at 2:35 AM
Thank you dear Mo - I'm glad you liked it! :-) <3
Manassian Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 7:38 AM
How moving. Loved this. Says much and leaves even more to the imagination
Barden Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 2:34 AM
The (reader's) imagination is a wonderful tool ... much more effective than "spelling things out", don't you think, Eileen? So pleased you enjoyed it - thank you for the kind comments, my friend! :-)
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