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Shadows On the Wall

I lay here, half awake seeing shadows of trees leaves swaying In the faint Autumn breeze making patterns on my bedroom wall now still now moving as cars rush by their headlights splashing a golden glow into the darkness keeping me awake so that I see shadows of trees making patterns on my bedroom wall © NLB

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/29/2009 5:09:00 AM
Congratulations for this lovely poem making it through first round! Your imagry is wonderful and it leaves me with a peaceful feeling, watching the shadows on the wall. Best of luck in the finals! Love, Robin
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Date: 9/27/2009 11:07:00 AM
Neva, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/25/2009 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 5:48:00 PM
you paint a picture with words! Best wishes through to the next round. Lainie
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Date: 9/24/2009 1:49:00 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/24/2009 10:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Neva. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/25/2009 10:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Neva. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/25/2009 9:24:00 AM
Congrats Neva on your poem being featured. Vince
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Date: 6/23/2009 1:49:00 PM
Congratulations my friend on this featured poetry. Ernilando
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Date: 6/22/2009 4:31:00 PM
I think most will relate to this poem. Enjoyed it. Congratulations on being featured this week. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 6/22/2009 7:21:00 AM
Neva - I spent years in a place where shadows were my only companions - I just wanted to stop by and congratulate you on having your poem featured this week – many blessings to you and those who share your heart – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 6/22/2009 2:22:00 AM
congratulations on your poem being featured, God bless you from diane
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Date: 5/22/2009 7:44:00 AM
Very vivid write, I see the shadows, nice.
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