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Shadows on Rooftops

yellow, orange, red, ribbons stretched across…the brilliant sun the sound of a rooster..,a fiddler on a roof, above Anatevka where roads are muddy and tradition is a foundation…milky town comes alive…chop, chop, choppy…and doughy…fish feathers…generations…heavy bundles and matchmaking questions, seriously funny with portentous blessing…worship peace and harmony interrupted by troublemaker, dancing dragging his boots down muddy or dusty…near chimney the bow strides across strings, pointedly…dramatically the sky still in lullaby state, far above all…it sadly waits God only knows what will happen next… In shadows, we all, knowingly or in denial cross the boundaries from the past to tomorrow in our present, we levitate, our worries like birds tomorrow will soon be our yesterdays, faraway looks no one can traverse nor enter, perhaps lean into but never mine…embrace not…feel sorry for not their fault…the split of friendship…waving bye bye, forgetting the punch line God only knows what happens next eventually existence ends and if we desire we may know the why and wherefore but likely we, gadabouts, will be checking out the horizon that is His hem filling heaven’s temple

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Date: 5/2/2025 4:59:00 AM
"In shadows, we all, knowingly or in denial cross the boundaries from the past to tomorrow in our present, we levitate, our worries like birds" -- Brilliant poetry! Your shadows, perhaps, places for others to meet and together, establish better, more enduring refined relationship. A FAV!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2025 7:05:00 AM
Oh thank you so much for the fave! Hugs!
Date: 5/1/2025 8:47:00 PM
God knows the future.Inspiring poem.A brilliant write.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2025 4:59:00 AM
Thank you, dear friend!
Date: 5/1/2025 6:11:00 PM
But even I had to learn that..."God only knows what happens next" in life. Thanks for your wise words, dear Kim <3 I know...long commenting, lol
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/1/2025 6:22:00 PM
We all do! Often when we look back, we realize and see the plan. Hugs
Date: 5/1/2025 6:10:00 PM
God says in the Bible somewhere people can "make the Word of God none effect through their traditions"- I learned about your topic before commenting, had some reading to do. It may be safer, it seems, but connection and faith in someone is more important. Your work is always so intriguing. Our faith in Christ pervades through every situation, different and unique with each soul, forget the tradition.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/1/2025 6:22:00 PM
Yes, thank!

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