Shadows At Night


Those shadows in the dark of night
     with howling winds that whip the air,
          so oft can stir an inner fright
               if what we see's not really there.

Hair stands on end tween wind and fear;
     the tree limb shadows dance around
          like eerie snakes, entwined, austere,
               they make their patterns on the ground.

Our minds paint images so true 
     that speak to us like living scenes;
          the shadows in the dark undue
               our courage while we conjure schemes.

The shadow forms sway two and fro
     like creatures of the night they creep;
          our senses dulled by vision's flow, 
               like dreams come live while we're asleep.

Our daring fades with night's black sky,
     and though the moon casts her pale glow,
          the shadows play and so defy
               our sense what's real and what we know.


Sandra M. Haight

~3rd Place~
Contest 415 Sponsored by Brian Strand
Judged:  03/27/2018

~1st Place
Contest: Second Chance #3
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Judged: 05/03/2016
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Gauthier Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 11:05 PM
Wonderful poem, Sandra. Congrats on your fine win.
Haight Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 4:22 PM
Thank you again, Line, for your congrats and support! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Kimathi Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 12:50 PM
Congrats Sandra, for your awesome placement with this dark piece!!! I wish movie directors would use your poem in a horror movie!! (just a thought)
Haight Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 4:22 PM
Thank you very much, Teddy, for your congrats and very supportive comments! I am pleased that you enjoy the poem. Sandra
Raven Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 8:57 AM
Hi Sandra, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. A wonderful Quatrain on the dark of the night. This is another i am glad to see in a winning spot, the write does so deserve to be. This has to be a seven Sandra. Hugs....Mike. XX
Haight Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 6:09 PM
Hi Mike, thank you very much. I am pleased that you enjoyed this poem. It received an NA in two prior contest! Sandra
Scars Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 7:53 PM
Sandra unbelievable this got NA! can't believe it. Congrats on your well deserved top win! :) Be blessed :)-luloo
Gorelick Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 11:47 AM
Nicely done...cant decide which stanza I like the best, they are all great. BG
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 6:36 AM
Sandra love the tempo you have here.. and you brought me to the scene where shadows looms.. ~Olive Eloisa -`)
Mcleod Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 1:25 PM
Very well thought out and organized Sandra. Just an excellent poem.
Lane Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 9:15 AM
This is wonderful, Sandra. Isn't it amazing...that we're so much more afraid of things we can't see than those that threaten us before our eyes?
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