Shadows

As quickly as it consumed us
The candle faded from sight
Shadows filled the night
But, oh, what a delight  



Feb. 10th, 2018 Saturday pm
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Faulkner Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 10:56 PM
Such a lovely image of the magic of candlelight, enjoyed this!
Bacha Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 4:05 PM
Hi Deb, trust me I still remember you, a friend is always a friend. I enjoyed reading your few lines full of positiveness for another tomorrow. Love Terry xoxo
Sietesantos Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 11:57 AM
A beautiful, well-articulated piece saying it all in a few words! What a delight! I enjoyed the read! Hugs. Pandita
Ricci Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 7:13 AM
Good Morning Debbie - This entry is lovely and I enjoyed your moment in time along with the imagery.
Degenhardt Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 9:35 AM
Wow, while with the candle we see, but once the dark appears, we feel. Lovely
Calasibetta Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 7:44 PM
Debbie, How lovely!
Turner Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 11:21 PM
Perfect!!
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