Shadow

Just a shadow
of who I used to be.
My heart has been scorched
my soul sun bleached
Both full of holes
and ragged edges
I gave up what defined me
I dropped my morals
I raised my boundaries
and I've pushed everyone outside
of the walls I have erected
around me.
Still I smile
I hug, I kiss, I laugh.
All hollow, empty echos
of how I used to
The brightness that was me
has faded away
like old blue jeans
parts of me are worn threadbare
I can't get myself back
Who I used to be has died
I can simply try to play
this empty echos part
a simple understudy
an empty heart
a devastated mind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 12:59 PM
Hello Jenifer, we all have shadows. have a nice day my friend.
Hunter  Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 6:28 PM
This has an easy, smooth feel to it, and your words resonate with me. This is truly fine writing.
Rodriguez Avatar
February 23, 2019 at 3:41 PM
Very well laid out ..very pleasing to read...gave myemotiones a work out.. well done
Ashley Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 6:28 PM
Your poignant emotional imagery reached in deep to touch the depths of my heart, Jennifer. A powerful and passionate piece so beautifully expressed. Congratulations on your wonderful win.. ~Susan
Fairchild Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 11:25 PM
When nothing's left, when we have been emptied, we are being prepared to be filled. Everyone has felt like this, and I have always found, at the bottom of the barrel, transcendence! Good for you! Honest transformation always begins with telling it like it is!
Reynolds Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 3:38 AM
Thank you
Gauthier Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 11:17 PM
A poignant write and most deserving win, Jennifer.
Reynolds Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 3:38 AM
Thank you
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 8:22 AM
Potent and bleak! Powerful penning. xomo
Reynolds Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 3:38 AM
thanks :)
Krutsinger Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 5:50 AM
The passion in this poem resonates from the heart. Nothing better!
Reynolds Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 3:38 AM
Thank you
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