Shadow

Just a shadow
of who I used to be.
My heart has been scorched
my soul sun bleached
Both full of holes
and ragged edges
I gave up what defined me
I dropped my morals
I raised my boundaries
and I've pushed everyone outside
of the walls I have erected
around me.
Still I smile
I hug, I kiss, I laugh.
All hollow, empty echos
of how I used to
The brightness that was me
has faded away
like old blue jeans
parts of me are worn threadbare
I can't get myself back
Who I used to be has died
I can simply try to play
this empty echos part
a simple understudy
an empty heart
a devastated mind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 3/5/2019 12:59:00 PM
Hello Jenifer, we all have shadows. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 2/28/2019 6:28:00 PM
This has an easy, smooth feel to it, and your words resonate with me. This is truly fine writing.
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Date: 2/23/2019 3:41:00 PM
Very well laid out ..very pleasing to read...gave myemotiones a work out.. well done
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Date: 2/9/2019 6:28:00 PM
Your poignant emotional imagery reached in deep to touch the depths of my heart, Jennifer. A powerful and passionate piece so beautifully expressed. Congratulations on your wonderful win.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/5/2019 11:25:00 PM
When nothing's left, when we have been emptied, we are being prepared to be filled. Everyone has felt like this, and I have always found, at the bottom of the barrel, transcendence! Good for you! Honest transformation always begins with telling it like it is!
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Jennifer Reynolds
Date: 2/6/2019 3:38:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 2/5/2019 11:17:00 PM
A poignant write and most deserving win, Jennifer.
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Jennifer Reynolds
Date: 2/6/2019 3:38:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 2/4/2019 8:22:00 AM
Potent and bleak! Powerful penning. xomo
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Jennifer Reynolds
Date: 2/6/2019 3:38:00 AM
thanks :)
Date: 2/4/2019 5:50:00 AM
The passion in this poem resonates from the heart. Nothing better!
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Jennifer Reynolds
Date: 2/6/2019 3:38:00 AM
Thank you
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