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Shades of Grey

Shades of Grey Happiness can fade away I change the way I feel today These Shades of Grey in yesterday These Shades of Grey in yesterday Her echoes "Take this madness" Soft and silly sick with sadness Sickened sadness painted Blackness Tethered strapless Choked and breathless -Wicked lies list Lust for you Kindness You shattered me Lifeless So "Can't find you", nice, Miss Gagged and bound 'Not scared to die'- kiss I dream My dream missed Sick with sadness Paint my Blackness Silly sad list Echoes Madness Staring silent scary Silence Whispered to me "I feel you through me" Happiness can fade away I change the way I feel today These Shades of Grey in yesterday These Shades of Grey in yesterday. "I'll paint the sky for you if you move the world for me~"

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Date: 6/24/2021 1:58:00 PM
I really enjoyed your poem. It flowed really well, I was almost singing it. I think it would make a nice song.
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Christian Alexander
Date: 10/26/2021 6:02:00 PM
Hi Joanna, thank you for your comment on my poem, your words mean so much to me. It makes me so stoked that you enjoyed this peace. Feel free to sing it any time you'd like^ :)
Date: 6/22/2021 11:14:00 PM
everything is impermanent; the happiness, the sorrow, the richness, the poverty; nothing is permanent- we all are in the caravan of mirage;
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Christian Alexander
Date: 10/26/2021 6:04:00 PM
Indeed my friend. Thank you so much for taking the time to post a comment, it means the world to me.
Date: 5/23/2016 5:29:00 AM
This is profoundly mesmerizing Christian! An excellent entry, so deserving of your win! #7 ; )
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Christian Alexander
Date: 9/18/2017 5:38:00 PM
Thank you so much Connie for your kind words. I am glad you enjoyed this piece~
Date: 5/23/2016 2:21:00 AM
I like the Shades of grey arrangement you did with this rhyme of yours! Congrats on your placement in my contest it was well deserved
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Christian Alexander
Date: 9/18/2017 5:32:00 PM
Thank you very much Brian. It was my honor to enter your contest. Thank you for the opportunity.
Date: 8/28/2015 12:03:00 PM
A well, penned piece that deserves all the attention. Congrats to your WIN Christian! ;-)
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Christian Alexander
Date: 9/4/2015 11:23:00 AM
Wow, thank you so very much Teddy. I think you're profile pic just inspired me to do a piece on the cultish dark underworld where the delicate sato-narcissistic lives of the ancient Egyptians still passionately pursued by eversocurious dedicated fundamental seekers searching, speculating and craving the solutions to un riddling finds as their maddening minds so driven to un-ravel a race of man and his philosophy of life's greater cause
Date: 8/23/2015 3:45:00 PM
Excellent piece, so glad it is on the winners list.
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Christian Alexander
Date: 9/4/2015 11:26:00 AM
Thank you so much Richard. Excellent is a very strong adjective and its much appreciated to receive to know someone enjoyed a story I wrote
Date: 8/20/2015 12:32:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome poem n win Christian!
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Christian Alexander
Date: 8/20/2015 1:00:00 AM
Thank you so much Dr. Upma
Date: 8/19/2015 9:05:00 PM
Christian. Congrats on your Mental Illness win.... SKAT
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Christian Alexander
Date: 8/19/2015 11:00:00 PM
Thank you Skat. It just happens to be my favorite topic :)
Date: 8/19/2015 8:19:00 PM
thanks
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Christian Alexander
Date: 8/19/2015 11:04:00 PM
You're most certainly welcoMe friend. In fact Thank You for the compliment. That one word says it all.
Date: 9/24/2014 5:33:00 PM
really very beautifully crafted piece
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Christian Alexander
Date: 9/24/2014 5:42:00 PM
Thank you very much Liam. I appreciate you taking your time to share your feedback.