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Shades Magic

Blue, white, and gold
Are kaleidoscopic shades
That mirror shades from elixir
Out into the wide, blue ocean
Where the waves that rock
The mix that falls from the sky,
Whirling into stunning stain
That even a rainbow might grudge 
Gorgeous blush dance with smugness.

Copyright © Sotto Poet | Year Posted 2024

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Regina Mcintosh Date: 7/6/2024 11:50:00 AM Lovely writing. God bless you always, love, Gina Login to Reply

Duke Beaufort Date: 7/3/2024 6:36:00 AM SP, it's amazing how you bring so much emotion and activity in so few words. You've got me imagining a scene out over the water with all kinds of colors mixing! Login to Reply

Deb M Date: 6/30/2024 3:42:00 PM Just lovely Lasaad! Debx Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 6/30/2024 4:56:00 AM Colors bring beauty. Think of a lackluster sky. It will be so dull. But think of the chromatic evening sky with the setting sun creating magic. Lovely poem dear Lasaad. Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 6/28/2024 12:35:00 PM Hi Lasaad my friend, Awesome poem, In awe of you, Awe inspiring, awesomely portrayed Awed by your poetic talent. Your metaphors are out of this world, and such lavish emotion is breathtaking. Blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply

Tonye George Date: 6/28/2024 11:01:00 AM Your work seems to always comfort me. The choice of words and calming metaphors used. Mr nature's calm. Great one Dear, Sotto. Login to Reply

Susan Lawrence Date: 6/26/2024 10:41:00 PM I love this in its depth and breadth and pure sensuality dear Sotto ~ especially whirling into stunning stain . So much emotion . Hugs, Susan :) Login to Reply

Paige Hind Date: 6/26/2024 11:43:00 AM Very breathtaking, I loved "Where the waves that rock The mix that falls from the sky" beautiful work Login to Reply

Yolanda Nicholsen Date: 6/25/2024 1:47:00 PM This is simply amazing work enjoyed reading your poem many blessings Login to Reply

Nancy Kaufman Date: 6/25/2024 3:07:00 AM Hi Sotto, I am always in awe of your poet's pallet. Belated congratulations on yesterday's POTD. Blessings to you.. Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 6/24/2024 1:40:00 AM Oh to be on some boat amid calm waves and a light breeze. Your poem transports me to the ocean. Great description. Login to Reply

Hilda Greenhough Date: 6/23/2024 9:36:00 PM A poetic painting of words that transport me to a gentle ocean. Well composed. Login to Reply

Benjamin Bartley Date: 6/23/2024 7:34:00 PM I'm feeling it. Thanks for sharing. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/23/2024 6:38:00 PM a bright work well done! Login to Reply

Karen Jones Date: 6/23/2024 2:59:00 PM Beautiful description of waves Login to Reply