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Shades Magic

Blue, white, and gold Are kaleidoscopic shades That mirror shades from elixir Out into the wide, blue ocean Where the waves that rock The mix that falls from the sky, Whirling into stunning stain That even a rainbow might grudge Gorgeous blush dance with smugness.

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/6/2024 11:50:00 AM

Lovely writing. God bless you always, love, Gina

Duke Beaufort

Date: 7/3/2024 6:36:00 AM

SP, it's amazing how you bring so much emotion and activity in so few words. You've got me imagining a scene out over the water with all kinds of colors mixing!

Deb M

Date: 6/30/2024 3:42:00 PM

Just lovely Lasaad! Debx

Valsa George

Date: 6/30/2024 4:56:00 AM

Colors bring beauty. Think of a lackluster sky. It will be so dull. But think of the chromatic evening sky with the setting sun creating magic. Lovely poem dear Lasaad.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/28/2024 12:35:00 PM

Hi Lasaad my friend, Awesome poem, In awe of you, Awe inspiring, awesomely portrayed Awed by your poetic talent. Your metaphors are out of this world, and such lavish emotion is breathtaking. Blessings, Jennifer.