Sotto Poet Poet Free verse

Shades Magic

Blue, white, and gold
Are kaleidoscopic shades
That mirror shades from elixir
Out into the wide, blue ocean
Where the waves that rock
The mix that falls from the sky,
Whirling into stunning stain
That even a rainbow might grudge 
Gorgeous blush dance with smugness.

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Regina Mcintosh July 6, 2024 at 11:50 AM Lovely writing. God bless you always, love, Gina

Duke Beaufort July 3, 2024 at 6:36 AM SP, it's amazing how you bring so much emotion and activity in so few words. You've got me imagining a scene out over the water with all kinds of colors mixing!

Deb M June 30, 2024 at 3:42 PM Just lovely Lasaad! Debx

Valsa George June 30, 2024 at 4:56 AM Colors bring beauty. Think of a lackluster sky. It will be so dull. But think of the chromatic evening sky with the setting sun creating magic. Lovely poem dear Lasaad.

Jennifer Proxenos June 28, 2024 at 12:35 PM Hi Lasaad my friend, Awesome poem, In awe of you, Awe inspiring, awesomely portrayed Awed by your poetic talent. Your metaphors are out of this world, and such lavish emotion is breathtaking. Blessings, Jennifer.

Tonye George June 28, 2024 at 11:01 AM Your work seems to always comfort me. The choice of words and calming metaphors used. Mr nature's calm. Great one Dear, Sotto.

Susan Lawrence June 26, 2024 at 10:41 PM I love this in its depth and breadth and pure sensuality dear Sotto ~ especially whirling into stunning stain . So much emotion . Hugs, Susan :)

Paige Hind June 26, 2024 at 11:43 AM Very breathtaking, I loved "Where the waves that rock The mix that falls from the sky" beautiful work

Mrs. Yolanda Nicholsen June 25, 2024 at 1:47 PM This is simply amazing work enjoyed reading your poem many blessings

Nancy Kaufman June 25, 2024 at 3:07 AM Hi Sotto, I am always in awe of your poet's pallet. Belated congratulations on yesterday's POTD. Blessings to you..

Victor Buhagiar June 24, 2024 at 1:40 AM Oh to be on some boat amid calm waves and a light breeze. Your poem transports me to the ocean. Great description.

Hilda Greenhough June 23, 2024 at 9:36 PM A poetic painting of words that transport me to a gentle ocean. Well composed.

Benjamin Bartley June 23, 2024 at 7:34 PM I'm feeling it. Thanks for sharing.

Nette Onclaud June 23, 2024 at 6:38 PM a bright work well done!

Karen Jones June 23, 2024 at 2:59 PM Beautiful description of waves