Shackles

“I am my own worst enemy. This, more than any other trait, proves my fundamental humanity.”  Dean Koontz

I know there is something bright above me
I can feel its brilliance 
I want to rise above this earth to join it
I can lift a few inches, but something is holding me back
I try to break free 
I realize 
I am not just being held
I am being grasped, tied, and violently restrained to the point that
I am sinking into the dirt and the mud that surrounds me until all 
I see is black
I feel my mouth and nostrils fill with muck
I threaten to suffocate 
I desperately wish for light, for air and - there it is.  Such Joy!
I am again rising to the light.  Why would 
I want anything else?  But, 
I can only lift a few inches.  Something is holding me back.

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Date: 2/15/2024 7:59:00 PM
Very beautiful. Big Congrats to win. Blessings
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 2/16/2024 9:13:00 AM
Thank you Anisha!
Date: 2/14/2024 7:38:00 PM
From the quagmire, we try to come out, but we are held to it by some negative forces. Even if we can't soar high, if we can stay a few inches above, that's enough. 'The spirit is willing, but the flesh is weak'. Powerfully presented. Congratulations on your well-deserved win, dear Robert.
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 2/15/2024 10:16:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa! I love your positive view that even if we can only stay a few inches above, that’s enough.
Date: 2/14/2024 9:36:00 AM
Very impressive winning work. Way to go.Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Congratulations. Sara K
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 2/14/2024 10:22:00 AM
Thanks, Sara!
Date: 2/14/2024 5:57:00 AM
Robert, congratulations on your win in my contest, love the quote, blessings, Constance
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 2/14/2024 8:57:00 AM
I’ve seen so many fantastic entries, it is a great honor to even receive a placement. Thank you!
Date: 2/4/2024 3:43:00 PM
oh my and at the end you are still not free of it. Great job with that word!
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 2/5/2024 10:03:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 2/3/2024 4:11:00 PM
It's that nasty devil again. Give him a good swift kick in the shin. Hey, welcome to PS Bob
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 2/5/2024 10:03:00 AM
Thanks for the welcome!
Date: 2/3/2024 11:45:00 AM
This is so powerful and brilliant how youv expressed here. I can resonate with that feeling and i see so many fighting to find the light and drowning in darkness and all that around, constant push and pull it is, a fight that many continue with and that last line just hits deep: pleasure reading your work: best wishes for the contest
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 2/3/2024 4:03:00 PM
I am truly grateful for your words. Thank you
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