Shackles

Some days I wake up and dream
-	Of being free of my shackles
Lost in my former scene
-	But you say I have no shackles

It is life’s challenges that plague my mind
-	Lost in the past of my glory days
The memories are not always kind
-	They all seem like a foggy haze

Gone forever is the dream
-	To put behind freedom’s past
All that remains is a shattered gleam
-	And so too the dream is dashed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Russ Avatar
March 2, 2009 at 11:07 AM
Thank you. You're right. Caroline
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March 2, 2009 at 10:53 AM
Caroline, what a wonderful poem filled with frustration and sadness! When one "dream is dashed," I guess all we can do is seek another that is more attanable. Thank you for sharing; you have a very clear writing style that I admire. Best wishes, Carolyn
Russ Avatar
February 27, 2009 at 10:08 AM
Thanks.
Russ Avatar
February 18, 2009 at 11:08 AM
Yes, thank you. I'm flattered. Caroline
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February 18, 2009 at 10:58 AM
Concise and well said!! Last stanza's my fav! I relate to this poems meaning, for sure!! Are you new to the Soup? If so, welcome!! Much love, Steve
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