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Shackles

Some days I wake up and dream - Of being free of my shackles Lost in my former scene - But you say I have no shackles It is life’s challenges that plague my mind - Lost in the past of my glory days The memories are not always kind - They all seem like a foggy haze Gone forever is the dream - To put behind freedom’s past All that remains is a shattered gleam - And so too the dream is dashed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/2/2009 11:07:00 AM
Thank you. You're right. Caroline
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Date: 3/2/2009 10:53:00 AM
Caroline, what a wonderful poem filled with frustration and sadness! When one "dream is dashed," I guess all we can do is seek another that is more attanable. Thank you for sharing; you have a very clear writing style that I admire. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 2/27/2009 10:08:00 AM
Thanks.
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Date: 2/18/2009 11:08:00 AM
Yes, thank you. I'm flattered. Caroline
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Date: 2/18/2009 10:58:00 AM
Concise and well said!! Last stanza's my fav! I relate to this poems meaning, for sure!! Are you new to the Soup? If so, welcome!! Much love, Steve
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