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There was a gigolo who swallowed a bee It pained him from stomach to knee. But with a shout and curse He saw things get worse. It buzzed him from a he to a she.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/7/2015 6:01:00 PM
Hi Paul...felt the sting right at the end, funny, witty...rgds, Thabang
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/8/2015 7:00:00 AM
Thank you, Thabang. I value and appreciate you supportive comments, and I'm pleased that the limerick gave you a laugh or two.
Date: 1/5/2015 8:54:00 PM
twisted... I like it.. I'm renee (:
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Date: 1/5/2015 9:36:00 PM
Thank you, Renee, for your comment. What makes limericks so much fun (as you already know) is that the composer can be as twisted as his/her creativity will permit.
Date: 1/5/2015 7:56:00 PM
That's quite a sting.. Yikes!
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Date: 1/5/2015 9:39:00 PM
Indeed, which suggests that it's best to keep one's mouth shut. Thanks for stopping by; I appreciate it.
Date: 1/5/2015 7:27:00 PM
Ouch, in a funny way, Paul. Saw the title and knew there was a funny story to it!
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/5/2015 9:46:00 PM
What you say demonstrates the importance of titles (so it seems to me). However, not everyone is as perceptive as you. In any event, I value and appreciate your thoughtful comment.
Date: 1/5/2015 2:55:00 PM
He lost his stinger...??? Funny limerick!!
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/5/2015 3:11:00 PM
That appears to have been the case. Thanks for stopping by; I appreciate it.
Date: 1/5/2015 11:08:00 AM
Still grinning, Paul...Lol!! :) john.
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/5/2015 2:44:00 PM
Thank you, John. And I'm still in awe of "Christmas Night Reflections."
Date: 1/4/2015 10:52:00 PM
Excellent pen Paul! I really enjoyed your very funny Limerick my very dear friend. ha ha ha lol...Sure you made me laugh and smile with this one. You're very good with these limericks.I wish you the best in 2015! Have a great day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D."
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/4/2015 11:08:00 PM
Dorian, You're so wonderfully supportive. Please know how much I appreciate and value your comments. To you and your loved ones: Every good wish for a magnificent 2015, including the continuance of your exquisite poetic voice.