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For the contest Sewing machine 1-9-16

Sewing machine, long idle, gathered dust Time to fix, needles gone, must have bust Last to use, mama's hand Peddles low, set on stand Thread on bobbin, red, white and blue Dried up tube of Elmer's glue On the side a wrinkled shirt Filled in holes, filth in dirt The war years seem like yesterday Some memories have gone away The sewing machine, brings back some The filthy shirt, brought me one Uncle Joe, gone too soon Killed in action, bing, bang, boom Plaques and pictures, left his mark The candle sputtered, spent, and all was dark April 17, 2018

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Date: 5/2/2018 5:20:00 PM
Good little rhyme, Charles. Worked in those lines great. Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 5/2/2018 3:48:00 PM
vivid imagery Charles, Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Charles Messina
Date: 5/2/2018 4:20:00 PM
Thank You so much Jan, so many good ones in the contest...Have a wonderful evening...Hugs // Charlie xx
Date: 5/2/2018 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement. Enjoyed.
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Date: 5/2/2018 12:54:00 PM
Thank you Susan, I really do appreciate that. Have a wonderful day dear...Happy you enjoyed it!
Date: 5/2/2018 7:44:00 AM
Congrats, Charles. A fun poem to read.
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Charles Messina
Date: 5/2/2018 12:53:00 PM
Hello dear Line, thank you very much for reading & the congrats...have a wonderful day. Happy you enjoyed it!
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Charles Messina
Date: 5/2/2018 12:53:00 PM
Hello dear Line, thank you very much for reading & the congrats...have a wonderful day. Happy you enjoyed it!

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