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For the contest Sewing machine 1-9-16

Sewing machine, long idle, gathered dust 
Time to fix, needles gone, must have bust 
Last to use, mama's hand 
Peddles low, set on stand
 
Thread on bobbin, red, white and blue 
Dried up tube of Elmer's glue 
On the side a wrinkled shirt
Filled in holes, filth in dirt
 
The war years seem like yesterday 
Some memories have gone away 
The sewing machine, brings back some 
The filthy shirt, brought me one
 
Uncle Joe, gone too soon 
Killed in action, bing, bang, boom 
Plaques and pictures, left his mark 
The candle sputtered, spent, and all was dark 

April 17, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/2/2018 5:20:00 PM
Good little rhyme, Charles. Worked in those lines great. Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 5/2/2018 3:48:00 PM
vivid imagery Charles, Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Charles Messina
Date: 5/2/2018 4:20:00 PM
Thank You so much Jan, so many good ones in the contest...Have a wonderful evening...Hugs // Charlie xx
Date: 5/2/2018 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement. Enjoyed.
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Charles Messina
Date: 5/2/2018 12:54:00 PM
Thank you Susan, I really do appreciate that. Have a wonderful day dear...Happy you enjoyed it!
Date: 5/2/2018 7:44:00 AM
Congrats, Charles. A fun poem to read.
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Charles Messina
Date: 5/2/2018 12:53:00 PM
Hello dear Line, thank you very much for reading & the congrats...have a wonderful day. Happy you enjoyed it!
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Charles Messina
Date: 5/2/2018 12:53:00 PM
Hello dear Line, thank you very much for reading & the congrats...have a wonderful day. Happy you enjoyed it!

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