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Seventh Heaven

I plunged headfirst, my silly stilted pride


          The instant I beheld your Cheshire smile


                    And dancing in a frame of summer blond


          The gold-specked umber iris of your eyes


From first hellos until this breath I draw


          Your heart has thrummed as if my very own


                    Despite the snares and distances ... of life.




~ 2nd Place ~  in the "Seven Lines Of Romantic Heaven" Poetry Contest, Silent One, Sponsor. The truly ironic thing is that I met my first true love on July 7, 1977, and the "luckiest" number for both of us was seven.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 6/27/2018 8:02:00 PM
A very beautiful and romantic write, Greg, congratulations on your win. .Hugs Eve ~`*
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/30/2018 6:49:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Eve - blessings! :-) <3
Date: 6/25/2018 11:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely love story in 7 lines. Well done! :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/26/2018 1:08:00 AM
Thank you so much, Susan - I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! :-) <3
Date: 6/25/2018 9:48:00 AM
Back with congratulations dear poet xomo <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/25/2018 10:36:00 AM
That's very sweet of you, Mo - thank you! :-) <3
Date: 6/25/2018 7:04:00 AM
One of my best friends was born on 7 7 77... Very romantic Greg.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/25/2018 10:35:00 AM
Thank you very much, S1 - I greatly appreciate it! Quite a significant date, all those wonderful sevens! :-)
Date: 6/22/2018 7:44:00 AM
So good xomo <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/25/2018 10:35:00 AM
Thank you, Mo! :-) <3
Date: 6/22/2018 5:48:00 AM
Gregory, I really enjoyed reading your romantic poem this morning, I especially liked how it connected to your picture!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/25/2018 10:34:00 AM
Thank you so much, LM, I greatly appreciate it! :-)
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