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Seventeen Seconds, Anywhere To a Silver Cloud

Running about the constellations, with poetic ruminations. Bouncing off planets gravity free All I can romantically ponder.verily, Is simply,you and me! In a heavenly garden of our own. With us both in wreaths of flowers Inside an opalescent, shining tower. Truly, I want no more than this, To live in your impassioned kiss. But when that hour comes and death approaches, I entreat thee, love of my days, Save me from this human kingdom! Our planet worried about animals and plants, while they, their human-selves do happily destroy, a baby?? My love! I fear I will rot in a loveless world with only ice cold faces. Absent eyes and vacuous heads. Sentences we spoke on the condemned list! Too many words, ruination, We never spoke in heiroglyphics! Please bring me home to thee, Where rivers of words overflow their banks, amorously. Oh, how I await and desire thee! Eternally your, Panagiota 5/13/2019 5:30am PST

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/14/2019 7:16:00 AM

I love the beginning of this poem; believe it or not, I think you can add more; great images that flood the imagination with food for thought.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/14/2019 7:44:00 AM

Thank you. Am not great at imagery.sorry. I'm really honed in on exppanding words that set the soul on fire. Guess they do not count, You and Andrea are masters with imagery. I am just A punk and a slow learner.))))PR PR.This is month two here. How long have you been writing! Panagiota

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2019 3:16:00 PM

I love the passion you bring to your poetry! Nice use of metaphors. thanks for your recent beautiful comments at my poetry.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/13/2019 3:23:00 PM

Andrea, it's absolutely true what I said about you.)) I' m not even aware when I am using metaphors. I am aware of trying to find Thd right words. Our language is a plethora of beauty. Why not use it? Panagiota

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/13/2019 1:33:00 PM

Interesting blend of themes. I'd like to think that while we can't insulate ourselves from reality, we can conduct ourselves in a way which ultimately creates a better one! (Am I a dreamer, or what?!) :) gw

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/13/2019 1:40:00 PM

Thank you. Deep thought you have Appreciatively, Crazy in CA, Panagiota

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/13/2019 11:12:00 AM

Yeah, abortion sucks man, a great rhyme Panagiota!, Aloha wk

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/13/2019 11:30:00 AM

I can tell how much you love kids! Canada murdered 4 million since 1969. That's so honorific, now the want Euthanasis for all! I saw them here in Ca trying to snuff my mother out. I fought the MDs tooth and nail. All participating may burn in hell,Murder is murder is murder, Appreciate your stand and visit Panagiota

Winged Warrior

Date: 5/13/2019 10:17:00 AM

Well crafted Panagiota...love has many realms...happy loving...^WW^

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/13/2019 10:55:00 AM

I see a typo in there and do apologize. What do I know of realms? Not much,-)) I do hope heaven is a place where full sentences are welcomed and there is no multi- tasking madness and Emojis are bound for hell. In heaven,we can be fully human again. Panagiota. Thank you WW!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/13/2019 8:28:00 AM

A glorious reminder that another world exists between two lovers who can escape the horribleness of reality in their wonderful togetherness.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/13/2019 8:43:00 AM

Exactly! Let me fly to him, please? Thanks and a scrumptious day be yours!