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Sevenbits -Diary

From her thick, littered journal Notes of passion burn with love Against clangs of dinnerware--- Till hours roam into near morn Her spouse digging through work’s pile. Upstairs, she jots tender lines Dreaming of intimate nights . Written for SEVENBITS Contest--Oct 3, 2017 Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Date: 10/8/2017 8:33:00 PM
Oh my, I LOVE this one. Such great writing Rora. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 10/8/2017 9:56:00 AM
That is a great entry for Nette's contest. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 10/8/2017 3:16:00 AM
Rora - sincere congratulations on your well-earned win, my friend, and blessings for more such recognition of your wonderful writing talents! Keep up the great work!
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Date: 10/7/2017 8:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Rora, lovely Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/7/2017 4:42:00 PM
Rora, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this beauty!
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Date: 10/7/2017 3:47:00 PM
that endless longing for love in the midst of emotional detachment, really amazing... fine congrats as i thank you for your entry, rora... write more!...huggs
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Date: 10/3/2017 11:40:00 AM
I am pinched by the thought of a spouse's neglect for a wife. Unique twist remarkably designed.
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