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Father’s diary antique Daughter found and read entries Unkind words he wrote for her. Sad, she flung the diary Her pale photo fell on floor, Written on it : words float on My unsaid love for you deep. October 3, 2017. Contest : SEVENBITS Sponsored by : Nette Onclaud.

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Date: 10/8/2017 9:50:00 AM
Achhh, what a sad but beutiful poem, congratulations on your win...
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Date: 10/8/2017 3:21:00 AM
Subimal - sincere congratulations on your well-earned win, my friend, and blessings for more such recognition of your wonderful writing talents! Keep up the great work!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/8/2017 3:50:00 AM
Many thanks, Greg for your nice comments. As mentioned earlier I value your comments so much.
Date: 10/7/2017 8:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Subimal, :'( so sad,,, that last line a killer... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/8/2017 12:57:00 AM
Thank you, Eve.
Date: 10/7/2017 4:44:00 PM
Subimal, so emotional, what an excellent writer you are, CONGRATULATIONS!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/8/2017 12:56:00 AM
Thank you, BW.
Date: 10/7/2017 3:50:00 PM
what a surprise; this was well done, subliminal... please accept my congrats and appreciation for entering my contest... huggs
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/8/2017 12:56:00 AM
Many thanks, Nette for appreciating and choosing the poem.

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