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Seven Times, the Bells Did Toll

Seven days, the sun set low Seven times, the bells did toll I walk the halls, I wait in vain Seems there’s no escape The air is thick, the windows sealed I can’t be sure, it’s hard to think I walk the halls, it’s been one week The earth’s been cast, flowers thrown An absinthe fog belies my brain In between, somewhere bound To not be sure, no spirit guide I’ll wait again, patience cedes Seven days, the sun set low Seven times, the bells did toll I must break through, is this my fate A world unknown for me, awaits

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/9/2018 7:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your excellent win! Eve ~`*
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/10/2018 5:53:00 AM
Thanks Eve xxoo
Date: 3/9/2018 12:25:00 PM
Dark and beautiful. Congrats.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/9/2018 1:37:00 PM
Thanks much, Dale !!
Date: 3/9/2018 12:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Mike. Well done with this dark and macabre style.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/9/2018 1:38:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line XXOO
Date: 3/9/2018 11:21:00 AM
Such a great poem for this difficult contest ! Congrats to you, Mike !
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/9/2018 12:13:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 3/9/2018 10:52:00 AM
great Poe style! loved it congrats :)-luloo
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/9/2018 1:38:00 PM
Thank you so much, Luloo XXOO
Date: 2/8/2018 3:42:00 PM
I enjoy the melancholy of both these poets Mike and I think you nailed their mix of styles. Bravo! : )
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/8/2018 5:43:00 PM
That’s very kind of you, thanks for the encouragement xxoo
Date: 2/7/2018 3:21:00 PM
A difficult challenge! I might try...we will see!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/7/2018 3:46:00 PM
You should, nothing ventured, nothing gained!!
Date: 2/6/2018 2:33:00 PM
I think you are brave to try this challenge, it is a diificult one... you did well to mix the two styles..
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/6/2018 2:44:00 PM
Thanks, sometimes it is just naiveté yet one must try and fail to learn and grow.... Also I am from Baltimore, had to try!!
Date: 2/6/2018 12:52:00 PM
Your words of superb imagery gently take the reader to a private place in your heart and we feel awed. Your have a gift in telling a story that lets the reader feel a part of what is unfolding before them. Very well done, Emile.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/6/2018 1:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Emile xxoo
Date: 2/6/2018 12:43:00 PM
Excellent poem Mike..expertly depicted..a winning poem!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/6/2018 1:06:00 PM
Thank you Vijay !!
Date: 2/6/2018 11:53:00 AM
Wow, Mike! This is a fantastic write!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/6/2018 1:07:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim xxoo

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