Premiere Contest WinnerSeven Hundred Septembers

Musings on the façade of Seville Cathedral

How patiently they suffer, these old saints!
Their sandstone features, crumbled, vague,
some noses gone (some medieval ague,
or Time's cruel drip?) they offer no complaints.

Stranded seven centuries on this reef,
they bake, and wait resignedly, begowned,
for bell-tower shade slowly to inch around.
Do bas-reliefs experience relief?

This church was once a mosque. In point of fact,
the holy ancient venerable Gothic pile
(and here one struggles to suppress a smile)
has relatively recently been sacked,

and only lately put to Christian use.
These saintly faces, preternaturally mild -
do they still fret? Or are they reconciled
to slow decay, as hand or ear works loose?

And do they savour time as you or I,
observing how, below them in the street,
perukes give way to pony-tails and pleats?
Or do, for them, Septembers flicker by

like squandered seconds? Do they muse on Fate
and Destiny? What if my youth has gone?
What if this woman keeps me hanging on?
They also serve who only stand and wait.
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Godwin Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 7:33 PM
Congratulations! Such intelligent, poetic musings and rhetorical questions, they wrap around the reader and hold them in wonderment, as well. I'm jumping up and down for you (while sitting on the couch.) Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Godwin Avatar
August 26, 2025 at 3:19 AM
Wow, that you believe in me is quite a compliment. Thank you, Michael. Came to tell you that I completely forgot to enter anything in Mile 10, now closed, which is not a winning strategy. You can't just put on your tennis shoes, you have to run.
Coy Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 11:37 PM
Cay Cay, thank you! Take it easy with the jumping - you have a marathon to win! Michael
Ashley Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 12:08 PM
Dear Michael, I enjoy your vibrant use of language, interesting, uncommon words, thoughtful questions in just the right places and the wry sense of humor percolating through your verse. Your last stanza and especially your last line is an impactful finale to an exquisite poem filled with beautiful, clever contemplations.. adore the title too! Congratulations for your shining trophy win in Mark's contest. Well-deserved! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Coy Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 12:41 PM
I wish I could write as beautifully as you do in your comments (your poems are altogether another plane). A sincere thank you, Susan. I deeply appreciate your kindness. Michael
Radice Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 5:12 AM
Just following on, Michael, from Lin's comments there about how well you express the mundane, inconsequential things, I couldn't agree more. I'm reminded of Sir Andrew Motion (UK poet laureate 1999 - 2009). He once stated "Honour the miraculousness of the ordinary..Look at the things in the foreground and relish stuff that can lose its glow by being familiar.. In fact, re-estranging ourselves to familiar things seems to be a very important part of what poetry can do". Great work. Cheers - Gary
Coy Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 5:29 AM
Thank you, Gary. I met Andrew Motion once. And yes, the ordinary things yield profound insights. I appreciate your observations. Michael
Lane Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 2:20 PM
You think of mundane, inconsequential things as I often do, Michael. It's not something we can detour around. Thoughts like those you've so visually expressed here are valuable to a poet, and you possess them. Congratulations on your marathon running!
Coy Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 2:41 PM
What a lovely comment! Yes, I try to capture the poetry in the mundane. Thank you, Lin! Michael
Toney Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 12:39 PM
Míchael, I enjoyed your witty architectural speculation and your last line literary allusion to Milton’s Sonnet 19. Congratulations on your first place finish on Mile 9 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 10 has already started.
Coy Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 2:17 PM
Mark, the admiration is all the other way - you even got the Milton reference! Many thanks! Michael
Cornish Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 12:32 PM
This is what an over thinker should do with their art -- love this!
Coy Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 2:15 PM
Craig, coming from you, that is high praise indeed. Thank you! Michael
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