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Night falls as day light falters, hidden in sweet twilight's arms. Day sleeps as night awakens. and grows darker, looking round Lovers sharing small secrets, knowing that the dark won't tell. Day might speak before she thinks. 5/14/20

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Date: 6/10/2020 6:31:00 AM
This is such a gorgeous piece ... the wisdom and grace of your years sings through everything you write, Joyce, and it is a quality that the rest of us can only dream of for now, (and I have abused myself far too much to have any illusions about seeing a century). Wonderfully-phrased and so romantic, yet with a hem of melancholy - my favorite qualities, and it's going into my faves. Blessings to you, Dear Poet! I hope you keep posting! :o) <3
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Date: 5/21/2020 2:26:00 PM
this is a sure winner for the contest, Joyce. I hope you are keeping well, my friend, & still enjoying that gardening xx
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Date: 5/19/2020 11:22:00 PM
Lovely words Joyce. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 5/15/2020 5:20:00 PM
You don't need luck with regards to this delightful entry, Joyce! 7/7 for you...and I definitely love the end lines! ~ Warm regards & take care // paul
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Date: 5/14/2020 6:29:00 PM
Joyce, those last two lines should place this on top. Love it.
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