Settles Quatern

Belonging to the earth and moon
The sun empowers blooms of June.
'Pon the horizon casts its rays
of pastel longings of great days.

Roosters crow up the sun with  tunes
belonging to the earth and moon. 
The sun delights  with a great start
Greets summer with an open heart.

The birds sing a love song aloud
From a stage to a roaring crowd.
Belonging to the earth and moon
the sun delights this afternoon.

A good afternoon capacitates
energy to flow through love gates,
settles; reaching the sun's commune
belonging to the earth and moon
  

Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
Contest: Do You Know Quatern
Written this May 05, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/13/2014 9:59:00 PM
Sara, Congratulations, in Andrea's awesome Do You Know Quatern? Contest... happy for all the winning poems.. Linda
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Date: 5/12/2014 10:53:00 AM
nature in its full glory, sara.. best of cheers on your fine award.. huggs
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Date: 5/12/2014 6:55:00 AM
I LOVE THE REPEATING LINE.. :) and the imagery.. :) you refreshing my thoughts.. :)
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Date: 5/11/2014 5:15:00 PM
Sara, each line needs to be 8 syllables in this form but I had to put you on the list because of the lovely imagery you used. congrats in my contest.
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Date: 5/6/2014 8:44:00 AM
I love your repeating line..well done my dear. BG
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Date: 5/5/2014 12:28:00 PM
My dear Sara, This is such a lovely poem you have wrote in Quatern. I am not nearly as fluent as your are in the various poetic forms. All I know is that as I read your poem, the rhythmic rhyme resonates ever so beautifully in my mind. I am particularly drawn to your use of the word "capacitates". It is a beautiful word we do not often see in creative writing. And you chose it well. Hugs;) Ben
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Date: 5/5/2014 12:25:00 PM
Sara, Very best of the best in the contest too:~) Peace, Deborah
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Date: 5/5/2014 12:24:00 PM
Hi Sara, This is the very best! Wonderful and beautiful. Wish I could give this ten golden stars Ten trophy's too. Thanks so much for sharing this with us here. Peace, Deborah
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Date: 5/5/2014 11:30:00 AM
glorious feeling all around as you captivate me with your poetic imagery, sara.. lovely nature song!.. huggs
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