Serving Happiness

Think Believe Understand Find happiness Humbly serve Jesus with dignity Written for Brian's contest.

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Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 10/11/2009 2:03:00 PM

Great poem! Love it indeed!

P Sheart

Date: 10/2/2009 7:05:00 AM

Very inspirational Michael. Enjoyed reading your heartfelt sentiments in this wonderful Tetactys. Good luck in Brian's contest. Have a inspiring weekend my friend. Love Light Truth Patty

John Freeman

Date: 10/1/2009 10:11:00 AM

I can certainly relate to this exaltation to our Lord Michael, Sincerely, Moses

Adell Foster

Date: 10/1/2009 8:55:00 AM

A marvelously uplifting message received in the lines of this very well formed tetractys. I thank you Michael for sharing such a fine inspirational write. Good Luck in the contest. :-) Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/1/2009 6:45:00 AM

Spot on Michael. Michael please spend your time on your family my dear friend. Do not feel that you need comment on my poetry. I would rather you get your life on track as you are doing and keep it there. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol YF4L

James Peranteau

Date: 10/1/2009 3:33:00 AM

Mr. Jordan,...very nice verse ! And I truly love when souls use suitable form,..and the Tetractys is especially suitable Sir! John 17:3,....and indulge yourself in the whole chapter,...John chapter 17,...here is where the light begins my friend ! *smiles* Have a great day ! james