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Premiere Contest WinnerServility, Sweet

Oh, such captivating concupiscence ...

I am lost to your thrall, your virtue's vassal
You are the perfect impish angel - raw sensuality, incarnate
You are hunger, insatiable and wry, and I your food
I watch you speak, breathe, speak ... phrases matter not

Chili pepper lips part to tempt me, as if in slow-motion
Plump, dewy, spicy-smooth, and salacious - fun-fruits, ripened
Unblemished sugar-cube teeth nip your lower lip and hold it
Mouth corners turn haltingly up in a vexing smile

Eyes sparkling, mischievous, coy, demure
Tugging like a lost puppy at my heart, spirit
Core, attending and rapt ... close, closer, closer still
Your eyes close, (mine stay open - I want to watch, NEED to)

Adoringly, I place a bent index under your mink-soft chin
Gently pull it up to mine ... the chilis part further
You release your sexy nip on them, mouth slowly opening
To the dance of a sweet, pink, bubble-gum quarry inside

It seeks mine out even before our mouths meet
Licks my lips as if ice cream, and they part to taste you
Tenderly, as if unknown, your soft blond tresses fall between
Mixing in our nectarous and esurient feast

Is there any candy yet as sweet ... as compelling and sublime??
Were it not for the life-sustaining needs of the human condition
Or the requirements of responsibility and motivation
I would lose myself - us - forever, in your clasp

In the exquisite, licentious, pure, and carnal enchantment
Of your consummate and delicious mouth
Locked away in the round-tower of your appetites
Slave to the flawless ecstasy that we create ...

With our love ... with our kiss.





~ 1st Place ~  in the "Love Poems for Her (That Special Romantic Interest) Cash Prize" Poetry Contest, Team Poetry Soup, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 1st Place ~  in the "Slave To Love" Poetry Contest, John Hamilton, Judge & Sponsor.
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De Beaulieu Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 5:23 PM
hello Gregory R. Baredn,Oh--so romantic. Enjoy your evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 22, 2020 at 1:19 PM
Hello Gregory Barden, you are welcomed. Enjoy your day my friend.
Barden Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 7:43 PM
Thank you so much, Darlene - blessings! <3
Inman Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 3:23 PM
Intense sensuality Gregory. Such a beautiful feeling to have.
Barden Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 4:55 PM
Many kind thanks, my friend, I so appreciate the wonderful comments ... my favorite genre to write in. Blessings! :o)
Gauthier Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 8:52 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win with this sensual gem, Gregory.
Barden Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 9:59 PM
That's very sweet of you, Line, thank you so much, my friend! Blessings! :o) <3
Warrior Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 7:20 AM
Congrats!! bro...excellent read...sending love...^WW^
Barden Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 9:58 PM
^WW^, my brother, so great to see you "about" - thank you so kindly for the comments - I'm happy that you liked this one! Blessings! :o)
Ashley Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 9:39 PM
Gregory, your luscious poem is ripe with desire and delicious imagery. This juicy piece drips with succulent sensuality and sensational artistry. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved trophy win. Warmest wishes always my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
Barden Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 9:57 PM
What a wonderful comment, Susan - thank you so much for the words! I'm really pleased you enjoyed this one, as it is my favorite genre to write in. Not always sure how these sensual ones will go over. Blessings, Friend! :o) <3
Hamilton Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 8:10 PM
Amazing as always Greg, congrats on another win!
Barden Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 9:55 PM
I am honored, John, and so appreciative ... wasn't quite sure if you would like this one, and I'm so pleased you did! What an amazing list of poems - to be among them is humbling, indeed! Thank you so much! :o)
Chiri Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 8:02 PM
Wow Gregory great poem and even better win! Congrats!;)
Barden Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 9:53 PM
Thank you so very much, Brenda, much appreciated Friend! :-) <3
Rodrigues Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 7:25 PM
Chili pepper lips, sugar-cube teeth just a couple goodies in this fine treat of a sensuous poem! Congrats on first place!
Barden Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 9:53 PM
Oh, that's very sweet of you, Kim, and I thank you kindly for the comments! Blessings! :o) <3
Allison Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 4:34 PM
phwoarhhh you are on fire with this sultry piece Greg, the imagery is hot hot hot!!:-) hugs jan xx
Barden Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 9:52 PM
Many kind thanks, Jan, I'm so pleased you enjoyed this one ... my favorite genre. Blessings! :o) <3
Casto Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 4:12 PM
Ravishing!
Barden Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 9:52 PM
Thank you, Banjo! :o)
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