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Oh, such captivating concupiscence ... I am lost to your thrall, your virtue's vassal You are the perfect impish angel - raw sensuality, incarnate You are hunger, insatiable and wry, and I your food I watch you speak, breathe, speak ... phrases matter not Chili pepper lips part to tempt me, as if in slow-motion Plump, dewy, spicy-smooth, and salacious - fun-fruits, ripened Unblemished sugar-cube teeth nip your lower lip and hold it Mouth corners turn haltingly up in a vexing smile Eyes sparkling, mischievous, coy, demure Tugging like a lost puppy at my heart, spirit Core, attending and rapt ... close, closer, closer still Your eyes close, (mine stay open - I want to watch, NEED to) Adoringly, I place a bent index under your mink-soft chin Gently pull it up to mine ... the chilis part further You release your sexy nip on them, mouth slowly opening To the dance of a sweet, pink, bubble-gum quarry inside It seeks mine out even before our mouths meet Licks my lips as if ice cream, and they part to taste you Tenderly, as if unknown, your soft blond tresses fall between Mixing in our nectarous and esurient feast Is there any candy yet as sweet ... as compelling and sublime?? Were it not for the life-sustaining needs of the human condition Or the requirements of responsibility and motivation I would lose myself - us - forever, in your clasp In the exquisite, licentious, pure, and carnal enchantment Of your consummate and delicious mouth Locked away in the round-tower of your appetites Slave to the flawless ecstasy that we create ... With our love ... with our kiss. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Love Poems for Her (That Special Romantic Interest) Cash Prize" Poetry Contest, Team Poetry Soup, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Slave To Love" Poetry Contest, John Hamilton, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 5/21/2020 5:23:00 PM
hello Gregory R. Baredn,Oh--so romantic. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/22/2020 1:19:00 PM
Hello Gregory Barden, you are welcomed. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/21/2020 7:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, Darlene - blessings! <3
Date: 7/28/2019 3:23:00 PM
Intense sensuality Gregory. Such a beautiful feeling to have.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/28/2019 4:55:00 PM
Many kind thanks, my friend, I so appreciate the wonderful comments ... my favorite genre to write in. Blessings! :o)
Date: 7/5/2019 8:52:00 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win with this sensual gem, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/5/2019 9:59:00 PM
That's very sweet of you, Line, thank you so much, my friend! Blessings! :o) <3
Date: 7/5/2019 7:20:00 AM
Congrats!! bro...excellent read...sending love...^WW^
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/5/2019 9:58:00 PM
^WW^, my brother, so great to see you "about" - thank you so kindly for the comments - I'm happy that you liked this one! Blessings! :o)
Date: 7/4/2019 9:39:00 PM
Gregory, your luscious poem is ripe with desire and delicious imagery. This juicy piece drips with succulent sensuality and sensational artistry. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved trophy win. Warmest wishes always my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/5/2019 9:57:00 PM
What a wonderful comment, Susan - thank you so much for the words! I'm really pleased you enjoyed this one, as it is my favorite genre to write in. Not always sure how these sensual ones will go over. Blessings, Friend! :o) <3
Date: 7/4/2019 8:10:00 PM
Amazing as always Greg, congrats on another win!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/5/2019 9:55:00 PM
I am honored, John, and so appreciative ... wasn't quite sure if you would like this one, and I'm so pleased you did! What an amazing list of poems - to be among them is humbling, indeed! Thank you so much! :o)
Date: 7/4/2019 8:02:00 PM
Wow Gregory great poem and even better win! Congrats!;)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/5/2019 9:53:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Brenda, much appreciated Friend! :-) <3
Date: 7/4/2019 7:25:00 PM
Chili pepper lips, sugar-cube teeth just a couple goodies in this fine treat of a sensuous poem! Congrats on first place!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/5/2019 9:53:00 PM
Oh, that's very sweet of you, Kim, and I thank you kindly for the comments! Blessings! :o) <3
Date: 7/4/2019 4:34:00 PM
phwoarhhh you are on fire with this sultry piece Greg, the imagery is hot hot hot!!:-) hugs jan xx
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/5/2019 9:52:00 PM
Many kind thanks, Jan, I'm so pleased you enjoyed this one ... my favorite genre. Blessings! :o) <3
Date: 7/4/2019 4:12:00 PM
Ravishing!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/5/2019 9:52:00 PM
Thank you, Banjo! :o)

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