SERPENTS’ SOIREE

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SERPENTS’ SOIREE ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Slinking silently, a slithering sight, Seven silly snakes, under starlit night, Sassy scales shimmering, shining so bright, Sipped sweet scotch, subtle, smooth, and smokey, Seeking to score and swap silly stories.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/3/2025 8:01:00 AM

Love this so much Sara. Fav for me. :)

Anne Winter

Date: 8/2/2025 11:16:00 PM

Dear Sara, thisss iss a ssplendid poem. I recited this poem out loud and I had so much fun! I love it! So brilliantly written! Alliteration is so perfect! And the writing is so gorgeous :)

Bill Baker

Date: 8/2/2025 10:20:00 PM

A fun poem to read, my Sara. An excellent example of Alliteration poetry. Write On! Bill

John Fleming

Date: 8/2/2025 5:25:00 PM

Hell of a collection of Ssss, Sara. Again you educate me...this Soiree business is a new one for me. :) john

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/2/2025 5:32:00 PM

thanks for your clever comments, John. I appreciate your visit. Color me grateful. Have a great evening, Sara