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December 19, 2023
"Funny New Year Resolution " Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France

Resolution this year…stop buying spree,
Infinite number …shoes, jewellery! 
Dior purses, handbags nice,
Chanel dresses, reduced price,
Family panicks at purchase they see! 

Clear the wardrobe, full of expensive clothes… 
Gucci, Klein, Kors - covering head to toes,
I must donate some good stuff,
Don't I have outfits enough!
For a lifetime of posh glamour I chose!

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/14/2024 4:43:00 PM

Reads like a plan for a simpler life. I enjoyed reading your post and thank you for sharing your talent with us. Your visit to my page with congratulations was encouraging. Sara K

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/4/2024 7:16:00 PM

OK. Now stick to it. ~ from a man with a daughter who has over 500 pairs of shoes...

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/1/2024 12:14:00 AM

Congrats. Thanks for sharing this. Joyous New year to you and your family. God bless you.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/1/2024 6:22:00 AM

Thank you, Beata. Appreciate your comment. A Happy New Year to you.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/31/2023 1:55:00 PM

Congratulations with your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Limerick write. Happy New Year... Write More In 24...........................

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/31/2023 2:25:00 PM

Thank you, Paula. Hope to write more in 2024. Happy New Year to you, My Dear Friend.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 12/31/2023 10:01:00 AM

Congratulations Mala! :) I had no idea you were a fashion diva. LOL

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/31/2023 12:45:00 PM

Well, you certainly did create a funny one! Make 2024 a joyful and happy year dear friend! :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/31/2023 10:29:00 AM

Ha ha, Linda, I am not (sometimes I watch masterclass by fashion designers)! Just wanted to create a funny poem! Thank you for your sweet comment!

Constance La France

Date: 12/31/2023 6:42:00 AM

Mala, congratulations on your win in my Funny New Years Resolutions contest, Happy New Year, Constance

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/31/2023 6:46:00 AM

Happy New Year to you, Dear Constance. Thank you for your placement. Wish you all the best in 2024.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2023 9:38:00 AM

If you really had all that stuff, I would sure not sell it. Ha ha.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/25/2023 9:58:00 AM

I don’t have all that stuff, and I am not a compulsive buyer, Andrea. I used to love shopping, not any more. You would be shocked to know I, and many of my friends, used to buy jewellery, when living in the Middle East. Writing this just for fun!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/20/2023 8:52:00 AM

Awwn haha, this poem is quite resonating for me, dear poetess.. Although, I'm not a compulsive shopper but yes, I do like to buy elegant clothing and stuff that fascinates my heart..kinda weird, but I need to admit that I'm very fond of buying different types of stationary things, books etc. This limerick really made me smile as it's such a fun aura that you've created here with amazing wordplay and captivating flow! I really enjoyed reading this, keep writing and shining, sending you light :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/20/2023 4:55:00 PM

Dear Hiya, Thank you so much for your lovely comment. My daughter is a compulsive buyer of books and stationary things - hard to stop her. I am not that great in writing funny poems, but Limerick is my favourite form! Really appreciate your kindest comments, inspires me to write. You are a talented poet, I am really impressed with your range of vocabulary, and unique metaphors. Love ~