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Serenity

Wind sweeps the meadow Grass gently bows to the sky A lonely flower

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/20/2009 6:17:00 PM
Nice use of imagery in this poem. Interesting use of personification. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 3/20/2009 12:33:00 PM
This has a contemplative mood to it; the last line gives it a nice turn.
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Date: 3/20/2009 8:35:00 AM
Such a lovely ode to windswept meadows and "lonely flowers." This great poem makes us see, feel and hear! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/20/2009 7:39:00 AM
Wonderful...it flows just like the wind was caressing it. Barbara
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