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Serenity

There's a place I sometimes visit in my mind,
where skies steal the soft color of robins' eggs.
Breezes brush through golden sea oats and I find
soft, white sand dunes where I sit and cross my legs
to count multi-hued shells high tide left behind
and listen, as for food, a circling gull begs.
To the sounds of tumbling waves, I meditate,
assured this sense of peace I can recreate.

Finding solutions mandates vigilant thought
beyond noisy freeways and our cluttered lives.
In webs of our own complications we're fraught.
So when a moment of frustration arrives
and snared in the web of life's hassles you're caught,
transport to shores where serenity revives.
Close your eyes, imagination takes you there;
just visit your private place from anywhere.




February 4, 2019
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Gauthier Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 12:13 AM
Beautiful, Carolyn. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Carber Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 4:38 PM
Lovely--I especially like the color-filled evocations in the 1st stanza. Congrats on your win, my friend.
Toney Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 3:51 PM
Carolyn, this is a very creative write and good advice for us all! Congratulations on your win on Mile 16 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest! Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 11:10 AM
Nothing calms the spirit like Mother Nature Carolyn. A lovely example for your contest. xxoo : )
Gondolf Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 9:59 AM
What a wonderful place to sit and meditate, Carolyn, this poem takes me there. I can feel the sea breeze in my face and hear the waves rolling in. John
Dietrich Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 8:11 PM
this is just gorgeous, Carolyn. I need to get off here. Did not have time to do much today so I am falling way behind. Anyway, I'm glad I took a look at this one because it is a perfect model for us.
Murray Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 6:03 AM
Just beautiful Carolyn. Hard to beat.
Allison Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 1:02 PM
What a wonderful example for the contest prompt We all need that special place to escape to Carolyn I also love to go down to the beach to gather my thoughts. It will be difficult to write anything as this bit ill try:-) hugs Jan xx
Y. Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 12:32 PM
Hi Carolyn, You have penned a beautiful and well written example for your contest. I want to go to such a place:-) Alexis
Kendrick Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 11:44 AM
Interesting thoughts penned from the special place in your mind. Creative work. Sara
La France Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 10:02 AM
Carolyn, loving Rispetto, so dreamy, and a great example for your contest ~
Agustin Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 7:48 PM
Great place! Great sample. Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.
Leffanta Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 4:20 PM
I think the first verse will make you the winner of your own contest! Aloha! Rico
Pandit Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 2:46 PM
WOW! This is really so well written..a wonderful place you created, Carolyn.
Devonshire Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 2:51 PM
Thank you, Vijay. It is a sample poem for my new contest.
Cunningham Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 2:27 PM
Lovely verse Carolyn, we all need that special place in our minds to escape the hectic pace of life we face daily. Good luck. Tom.
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