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Surrendering

surrendering his hand in hers last breath posted on October 9, 2018

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Date: 10/10/2018 1:34:00 PM
Makes me think of the couples I see walking hand-in-hand, and smiling-
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Date: 10/10/2018 4:33:00 PM
That's nice, Michelle. I didn't mean "passing by" but that is a lovely thought.
Date: 10/10/2018 1:42:00 AM
She was always by his side thru life and death
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Date: 10/10/2018 7:49:00 AM
That's exactly how my dad passed away - ready and ever so peacefully. My mother was amazed she even heard my dad call out her name as it was more of a whisper.

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