Serenade

a stunning songster's smooth streaming serenade sifts~ sweet to ears sheer treat Placed First For Strand's (1065) Poetry Contest Sponsor- Brian Strand (Earlier submitted for alliterative Haiku Contest)

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/24/2024 3:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your work with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Debra L Brown

Date: 2/12/2022 12:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your "sweet" win Valsa. Blessings ~ Debra

S. Wesley Mcgranor

Date: 1/21/2022 10:18:00 PM

Who are you talking to?

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/21/2022 12:36:00 PM

Your Haiku serenade is a wonderful write. Have a great day/weekend...............

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/21/2022 6:19:00 AM

Valsa, your writing is exquisite, both in word and in tone... best of luck in the contest.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2022 5:10:00 PM

Sweet indeed. Wonderful alliteration

Valsa George
Date: 1/21/2022 4:39:00 AM

Thank you Andrea... ! I admire your talent as a poet....

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/20/2022 7:47:00 AM

- Beautiful both in text and sound, Valsa ... best wishes in the contest ... a top winner :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Valsa George
Date: 1/21/2022 4:38:00 AM

Thank you so much dear Anne....! Love and hugs !

Anil Deo

Date: 1/20/2022 3:31:00 AM

I'm gonna be a copy cat! Shalom shalom Sis

Valsa George
Date: 1/21/2022 4:37:00 AM

Why should you be a copycat when you have enough substance with you ? Enjoyed your humor !

Anil Deo

Date: 1/20/2022 3:30:00 AM

Haiku with bonu$ "s" alliteration. Impressive work, Valsa. A FAVE

Valsa George
Date: 1/21/2022 4:34:00 AM

Thanks a lot Anil... ! Stay blessed !

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 1/20/2022 12:57:00 AM

It is indeed a pleasure to listen to a soothing sweet serenade..., as it is a pleasure to read your wonderful words of poetry... Best wishes in the contest my friend... Are you a Malayali? Do let me know..., got a doubt from your name...because, am a Malayali born in Palakkad, Kerala, brought up in Chennai, Tamilnadu, and since marriage, in Maharashtra... Hope you are enjoying your poetic journey in Soup.. Hugs... ~ Ani

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 1/20/2022 4:04:00 AM

Good to know you are a Malayali, dear Valsa... I guessed it right. I have heard of Muvattupuzha. Thank you for your kind words on my poetry, you are so very talented my friend.. Am glad you are enjoying your poetic journey at Soup, by sharing your inspiring poems and by learning new forms... Hugs... ~ Ani

Valsa George
Date: 1/20/2022 1:13:00 AM

Ani, I am a Malayalee from a rural village in the district of Ernakulam, settled in Muvattupuzha, a semi urban town in the eastern side of Cochin. Glad to know that you are a Malayalee.... and am very proud of you with such rich imagination and poetic gifts. My association with poetry soup is a lovely experience, getting introduced to great poets and poetic forms ! Love and hugs!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/20/2022 12:20:00 AM

Alliteration with a capital A. I love the calm of your haiku. Best for a win, my friend.

Valsa George
Date: 1/20/2022 1:26:00 AM

Thanks a lot Victor. .... Such lovely comments have raised my confidence in trying this newly learnt poetic form more often.

John Watt

Date: 1/19/2022 10:44:00 PM

Valsa, your serenade is a soft and soothing stream of serenity. Keep going on your journey of haiku discovery! Blessings ~ John

Valsa George
Date: 1/20/2022 1:27:00 AM

I feel so enthused....Thanks a lot John for your sweet comment !

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/19/2022 10:07:00 PM

what a treat for the ears :)

Valsa George
Date: 1/20/2022 1:28:00 AM

So delighted by your lovely words.... ! Thanks a lot Rose.

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 1/19/2022 9:12:00 PM

Absolutely lovely. You write really well! Have a wonderful day ahead friend ??

Valsa George
Date: 1/20/2022 1:30:00 AM

I see your name in the winners list very often. Congratulations dear friend and thanks for your words of encouragement.