Serenade

a stunning songster's
smooth streaming serenade sifts~
sweet to ears  sheer treat


Placed First
For Strand's (1065) Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Brian Strand
(Earlier submitted for alliterative Haiku Contest)

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Sara Kendrick

February 24, 2024 at 3:45 AM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your work with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Debra L Brown

February 12, 2022 at 12:37 PM

Congratulations on your "sweet" win Valsa. Blessings ~ Debra

S. Wesley Mcgranor

January 21, 2022 at 10:18 PM

Who are you talking to?

Paula Goldsmith

January 21, 2022 at 12:36 PM

Your Haiku serenade is a wonderful write. Have a great day/weekend...............

Sotto Poet

January 21, 2022 at 6:19 AM

Valsa, your writing is exquisite, both in word and in tone... best of luck in the contest.

Andrea Dietrich

January 20, 2022 at 5:10 PM

Sweet indeed. Wonderful alliteration

Valsa George

January 21, 2022 at 4:39 AM

Thank you Andrea... ! I admire your talent as a poet....

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 20, 2022 at 7:47 AM

- Beautiful both in text and sound, Valsa ... best wishes in the contest ... a top winner :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Valsa George

January 21, 2022 at 4:38 AM

Thank you so much dear Anne....! Love and hugs !

Anil Deo

January 20, 2022 at 3:31 AM

I'm gonna be a copy cat! Shalom shalom Sis

Valsa George

January 21, 2022 at 4:37 AM

Why should you be a copycat when you have enough substance with you ? Enjoyed your humor !

Anil Deo

January 20, 2022 at 3:30 AM

Haiku with bonu$ "s" alliteration. Impressive work, Valsa. A FAVE

Valsa George

January 21, 2022 at 4:34 AM

Thanks a lot Anil... ! Stay blessed !

Anitha Jayasankar

January 20, 2022 at 12:57 AM

It is indeed a pleasure to listen to a soothing sweet serenade..., as it is a pleasure to read your wonderful words of poetry... Best wishes in the contest my friend... Are you a Malayali? Do let me know..., got a doubt from your name...because, am a Malayali born in Palakkad, Kerala, brought up in Chennai, Tamilnadu, and since marriage, in Maharashtra... Hope you are enjoying your poetic journey in Soup.. Hugs... ~ Ani

Anitha Jayasankar

January 20, 2022 at 4:04 AM

Good to know you are a Malayali, dear Valsa... I guessed it right. I have heard of Muvattupuzha. Thank you for your kind words on my poetry, you are so very talented my friend.. Am glad you are enjoying your poetic journey at Soup, by sharing your inspiring poems and by learning new forms... Hugs... ~ Ani

Valsa George

January 20, 2022 at 1:13 AM

Ani, I am a Malayalee from a rural village in the district of Ernakulam, settled in Muvattupuzha, a semi urban town in the eastern side of Cochin. Glad to know that you are a Malayalee.... and am very proud of you with such rich imagination and poetic gifts. My association with poetry soup is a lovely experience, getting introduced to great poets and poetic forms ! Love and hugs!