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Serenade

a stunning songster's
smooth streaming serenade sifts~
sweet to ears  sheer treat


Placed First
For Strand's (1065) Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Brian Strand
(Earlier submitted for alliterative Haiku Contest)

Copyright © Valsa George | Year Posted 2022

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Sara Kendrick Date: 2/24/2024 3:45:00 AM Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your work with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K Login to Reply

Debra L Brown Date: 2/12/2022 12:37:00 PM Congratulations on your "sweet" win Valsa. Blessings ~ Debra Login to Reply

S. Wesley Mcgranor Date: 1/21/2022 10:18:00 PM Who are you talking to? Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/21/2022 12:36:00 PM Your Haiku serenade is a wonderful write. Have a great day/weekend............... Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 1/21/2022 6:19:00 AM Valsa, your writing is exquisite, both in word and in tone... best of luck in the contest. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/20/2022 5:10:00 PM Sweet indeed. Wonderful alliteration Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 1/21/2022 4:39:00 AM Thank you Andrea... ! I admire your talent as a poet....

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2022 7:47:00 AM - Beautiful both in text and sound, Valsa ... best wishes in the contest ... a top winner :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 1/21/2022 4:38:00 AM Thank you so much dear Anne....! Love and hugs !

Anil Deo Date: 1/20/2022 3:31:00 AM I'm gonna be a copy cat! Shalom shalom Sis Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 1/21/2022 4:37:00 AM Why should you be a copycat when you have enough substance with you ? Enjoyed your humor !

Anil Deo Date: 1/20/2022 3:30:00 AM Haiku with bonu$ "s" alliteration. Impressive work, Valsa. A FAVE Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 1/21/2022 4:34:00 AM Thanks a lot Anil... ! Stay blessed !

Anitha Jayasankar Date: 1/20/2022 12:57:00 AM It is indeed a pleasure to listen to a soothing sweet serenade..., as it is a pleasure to read your wonderful words of poetry... Best wishes in the contest my friend... Are you a Malayali? Do let me know..., got a doubt from your name...because, am a Malayali born in Palakkad, Kerala, brought up in Chennai, Tamilnadu, and since marriage, in Maharashtra... Hope you are enjoying your poetic journey in Soup.. Hugs... ~ Ani Login to Reply Anitha Jayasankar Date: 1/20/2022 4:04:00 AM Good to know you are a Malayali, dear Valsa... I guessed it right. I have heard of Muvattupuzha. Thank you for your kind words on my poetry, you are so very talented my friend.. Am glad you are enjoying your poetic journey at Soup, by sharing your inspiring poems and by learning new forms... Hugs... ~ Ani Valsa George Date: 1/20/2022 1:13:00 AM Ani, I am a Malayalee from a rural village in the district of Ernakulam, settled in Muvattupuzha, a semi urban town in the eastern side of Cochin. Glad to know that you are a Malayalee.... and am very proud of you with such rich imagination and poetic gifts. My association with poetry soup is a lovely experience, getting introduced to great poets and poetic forms ! Love and hugs!

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/20/2022 12:20:00 AM Alliteration with a capital A. I love the calm of your haiku. Best for a win, my friend. Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 1/20/2022 1:26:00 AM Thanks a lot Victor. .... Such lovely comments have raised my confidence in trying this newly learnt poetic form more often.

John Watt Date: 1/19/2022 10:44:00 PM Valsa, your serenade is a soft and soothing stream of serenity. Keep going on your journey of haiku discovery! Blessings ~ John Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 1/20/2022 1:27:00 AM I feel so enthused....Thanks a lot John for your sweet comment !

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 1/19/2022 10:07:00 PM what a treat for the ears :) Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 1/20/2022 1:28:00 AM So delighted by your lovely words.... ! Thanks a lot Rose.

Rama Balasubramanian Date: 1/19/2022 9:12:00 PM Absolutely lovely. You write really well! Have a wonderful day ahead friend ?? Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 1/20/2022 1:30:00 AM I see your name in the winners list very often. Congratulations dear friend and thanks for your words of encouragement.