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Sequence-Still Birth

fleeting images as crystalline hallucinatory visions; lying as flotsam, washed by the tide, transotory mayfly that hide within my mind's eye- until captured and penned.. then die

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/12/2009 2:40:00 PM
Interesting last five lines. Thanks for the comments on my poems. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 11/9/2009 3:51:00 PM
Brian, excellent imagery here within this beautiful poetic write. Very evokotive indeed! Many blessings to you and yours. Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/9/2009 9:58:00 AM
very evocative a nice write...good imagery too! Very very nice! LIght & Love
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Date: 11/9/2009 8:22:00 AM
Well penned Brian... You take an interesting direction in your approach... Different, unique and appealing to the eye.... Wonderful write as always friend...:JP}
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Date: 11/9/2009 4:27:00 AM
But , the words live onnnnnnn . Well penned , as ever . Rgds from J R Hartley ... ( Do you remember that old ad . ? )...
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Date: 11/9/2009 4:17:00 AM
Magnificent flow of words... such imagery too.. I am still learning all the variations in the poetry world and u are an excellent teacher.. wonderful write, Brian, enjoyed.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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