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Sequence - Footle - All Hallows' Eve

The doomed
entombed

Now rise
death cries

In fear
we hear

Death trills
blood chills......




Inspired by Donna Goldens' Footle Fright contest

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Cecil Hickman

October 27, 2009 at 11:25 PM

woderful and scary a very indepth piece for Halloween and Congratulations on your win,,and Thank you for reading and commenting upon my words,,Blessings..Cecil

Doris Culverhouse

October 27, 2009 at 7:20 AM

congrats on the second place, great poem!!

October 26, 2009 at 4:52 PM

Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your second place finish in the footle contest to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. Keep up the good writing! Karen

Joyce Johnson

October 26, 2009 at 4:03 PM

Well done Robin and congrats on your win. Thank you for your comments on mine. Love, Joyce

Debbie Guzzi

October 26, 2009 at 2:08 PM

You go Gal!!! Big winner!! Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire

October 26, 2009 at 6:44 AM

Congratulations, Robin! Love your footle series. A well-deserved win! Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

October 26, 2009 at 6:32 AM

Great job, Robin! Congratulations!! ~ Carrie

James Fraser

October 26, 2009 at 4:15 AM

Congrats in you win in Donna's footle contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 26, 2009 at 3:34 AM

Congratulations on your win in Donna's contest Robin. Love, Carol

Corinne Curcio

October 26, 2009 at 3:34 AM

Congrats on your EXCELLENT footle win, Robin

Sean Kelly

October 26, 2009 at 12:19 AM

A Royal footle success , QR and well done ....

Donna Golden

October 25, 2009 at 10:22 PM

Wonderful footle, Robin! Congratulations on your placing in the Footle Fright contest! Hugs, Donna

Cecil Hickman

October 18, 2009 at 10:06 PM

a powerful sequence of words and thoughts that set forth the Halloween theme so very well,,,,Thank you for reading and commenting upon my words,,,Blessings..Cecil

John Loving Iii

October 17, 2009 at 9:07 AM

the only time of year to laugh at monsters and horror. i love it. jhl

John Freeman

October 16, 2009 at 7:03 PM

Awsome footle Robin, Wickedly witty, my Lady! Sincerely, Love, Moses

Debbie Guzzi

October 16, 2009 at 5:34 PM

yike scary wow! Light & Love

James Fraser

October 16, 2009 at 2:44 PM

Awesome Footle Robin, if this don't get into the winners enclosure > i should be turned into a pumpkin for my prediction not being proven to be true >> James

Doris Culverhouse

October 16, 2009 at 1:38 PM

great job, nicely penned.

Carolyn Devonshire

October 16, 2009 at 12:28 PM

We must bow to the footle Mistress! This is quite a wicked write! Oops, I think I hear something groaning at the door. Could it be? Oh, no! Robin was right! Love you, dear. Carolyn