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Sequence Ebb & Flow

Whipped
by the
raging wind,
white horses ride
the
tide
until 
exhausted-
die upon the
shore

Inspired by Winslow Homer's paintings of the American seaboard at Maine

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

January 29, 2010 at 6:40 PM

Congrats Brian on "sequence Ebb & Flow" being featured. Vince

Ann Rich

January 28, 2010 at 7:47 AM

Buddhamus! Congrats. AR

Jared Pickett

January 27, 2010 at 6:46 AM

Excellent verse here friend... Congrats on the feature this week.....:JP]

John Freeman

January 25, 2010 at 7:02 PM

Top-notch feature,Brian. Congratulations, Sincerely, Moses

Daver Austin

January 25, 2010 at 2:42 PM

Yep! This fits in my memory very well...I think you've put wonderful motion into your stormy seashore. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Janette Fisher

January 25, 2010 at 11:08 AM

Brian another wonderful piece many congrats on your feature. Rgds Janette

Carrie Richards

January 25, 2010 at 8:45 AM

I am so glad to see this poem again, another chance to capture the images of "white horses" on the tide! ~ Congratulations on this featured work! ~ Best regards, Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 24, 2010 at 9:26 PM

Congrats Brian on your featured poem of the week on the Soup... excellent choice... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Jo Bien

January 24, 2010 at 6:04 PM

congrats Brian...I like this...JB

Doris Culverhouse

January 24, 2010 at 4:47 PM

congrats on the featured poem, nicely penned.

James Fraser

January 24, 2010 at 1:57 PM

Many congratulations in you deserved featured poem this week, Brian >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 24, 2010 at 1:40 PM

Congratulations are your well deserved featured poem this week Brian. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

October 21, 2009 at 3:20 AM

Brian, Congratulations, on your placement in the June 2009 Poetry Soup contest. I hope you are basking in the glory! You deserve it. Thanks for all you do to help us stretch as poets through your contests. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Krista Kurth

October 19, 2009 at 9:46 AM

Congratulations Brian on the honorable mention and also on the imagery evoked by your poem. I could see the wild waves on the shore. All the best, Krista