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Sequence-Up Above

Cauliflower pillows,nimbus topped weeps a shower of warm raindrops Clouds,wine dark in a vivid hue drift in seas of celestial blue Sunlight peeping out from a cloud cloaks the landscape with a scarlet shroud

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Belinda Parish

Date: 3/8/2009 7:44:00 AM

I really never thought about it, but now that you mention it...sometimes storm clouds do look like Cauliflower pillows...love the imagery in this one...~Belinda~

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/7/2009 11:41:00 AM

I really like this one. Just enough words ;) Thanks for helping me stretch form wise! Light & Love

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/7/2009 10:10:00 AM

I love the visuals in this piece, Brian. Abolutely beautiful. Thank you for the opportunity to take part in the Easter Epistle contest. I am honored to have placed first. Your file adress is ccorrect. Love, Robin

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/7/2009 9:45:00 AM

Sounds too beautiful and unreal, but so is nature at times and you have captured it brilliantly! A gorgeous painting in my mind's eye. Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/7/2009 9:17:00 AM

Makes me think that you have painted this yourself...perhaps it is hanging on a wall in your home? Lovely! ~ Carrie

Sandra Hudson

Date: 3/7/2009 9:09:00 AM

Beautiful description of a hawaiian sunset. it always rains with sunshine too!-Always Alexandra

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 3/7/2009 1:38:00 AM

And what a gorgeous sight it is you have painted here, Brian, lovely, Kristin

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/7/2009 12:35:00 AM

Sounds so beautiful. You write in a way that makes it stand out like a painting in my mind. You are such a gifted writer. Smiles from Lolita